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Stone Birds 04-21-2009 03:54 PM

i feel like buying this song it's nice and matches my style
suddenly
I hide behind this facade
stars in your eyes is blinding
my illusions

Northernlight
I call on you
attack me above
touch me from above
suffocate the night
Northernlight
Northernlight
Northernlight

In this night I fall in
A grief I cant recall
your hands
my pain

Northernlight
Sense my fear
attack m from above
touch me from nowhere
suffocate the fear
Northernlight
Northernlight
This night

Holding my breath
in this fire
heart losing beats
You say you say
you did

Northernlight
wipe my tears
with this power
touch me from above
Northernlight
Northernlight
tonight
Northernlight you sense
my fear
tonight

Come now to me
Northernlight
attack me free
this last
time

yvi_poison 04-21-2009 04:12 PM

Thanks!! if you are interested in any lyrics , don´t hesitate to contact me:D

Stone Birds 04-22-2009 06:46 AM

i'm just wondering what the melody is to it. can you give me a sampl? (Maybe use youtube or somethin)


:)

yvi_poison 04-22-2009 02:57 PM

I dont play instruments and find it hard to make a sample, but how you mean use youtube? I have a melody but its in my head:)

Stone Birds 04-22-2009 03:50 PM

just take a video or soemthing of it being sung.

:)

Naked 04-22-2009 06:05 PM

:)

-ragnemusi 01-09-2010 07:27 PM

woow. love them , girl , yaah , you got talent :)

ACDCfan94 01-14-2010 12:26 PM

Amazing
 
Hey! You are super talented. loved it!

t3hplatyz0rz 01-16-2010 08:17 AM

It's really, really good. One thing I think, though, is that it's a little too dark for my tastes. Maybe you could try putting it to some relaxed reggae to lighten up the mood? (jk)

I don't get the point of "Northernlight". As with all your stuff, it's very poetic, but I don't really know what it's about. It's good to have mystery, and it's good to have clarity, but you need more clarity and less mystery in that song.

Also, remember, you have a talent, but it takes more than that. You also have to remember to not let the people who say "rubbish and that's being generous" let you down too much. You just can't please everybody.

BillyShears 01-20-2010 02:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by moondust (Post 639491)
rubbish and thats being generous

put up you're lyrics then, turkey. :crazy:


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