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yvi_poison 04-15-2009 08:23 AM

Need help ...
 
Im trying to write this song, "confidential"..
What do u think so far???
I am totally stuck:/



Confidential

Keep it to be a secret
between you and me
entrust me again

Living in denial
all you do
One heart in two hearts playing
Keepin´ it confidential
in everlasting denial

You say you dont want to hurt her
what we have is too real
to be lost

condiden-tial-ly be mine
confiden-tial-ly be mine tonight
theres no rules
Confiden-tial-ly mine all mine

Keep it in a fantasy
between distances
hiding away again

You are my mister
I play your mistress
There is only a few rules

davidl 04-18-2009 01:10 AM

it looks good

do you play any instruments, yvi_poison?

Stone Birds 04-18-2009 10:53 AM

I think this is pretty good, but what genre is this and what're the instruments you're gonna use.

yvi_poison 04-18-2009 05:37 PM

Hey, i don´t play any instruments, just kind of make up my own melody in head.. So i find it difficult to explain it, but hope to get some help, and im open to work with people:)


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