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Old 04-15-2009, 08:23 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Im trying to write this song, "confidential"..
What do u think so far???
I am totally stuck:/



Confidential

Keep it to be a secret
between you and me
entrust me again

Living in denial
all you do
One heart in two hearts playing
Keepin´ it confidential
in everlasting denial

You say you dont want to hurt her
what we have is too real
to be lost

condiden-tial-ly be mine
confiden-tial-ly be mine tonight
theres no rules
Confiden-tial-ly mine all mine

Keep it in a fantasy
between distances
hiding away again

You are my mister
I play your mistress
There is only a few rules
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Old 04-18-2009, 01:10 AM   #2 (permalink)
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it looks good

do you play any instruments, yvi_poison?
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Old 04-18-2009, 10:53 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I think this is pretty good, but what genre is this and what're the instruments you're gonna use.
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Old 04-18-2009, 05:37 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Hey, i don´t play any instruments, just kind of make up my own melody in head.. So i find it difficult to explain it, but hope to get some help, and im open to work with people
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