darkcornerinthecloset

dont you mean should NOT be writing music? is that a typo?

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tymygy

yeah sorry.

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yvi_poison

I like the title it was catching "I´ll mourn the day".. U shud try and write the song several times to u get it how u want it! Maybe more verses and one thing I do (at least try to..) is to put down my feelings in many ways of expressions..

Thrice

Preaching to the choir,

Is the song kind of like an avenged song, or another band? Im trying to get the feel for it. I imagined a girly kind of dude singing it, but maybe its a ****ing crazy song like circle takes the square. The subject is fairly outplayed these days, and a bit of figurative language (metaphors personification similes) can make any lyrics magical.

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