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Old 06-12-2009, 07:09 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Cool Clay's First Song

Title: Unititled
Artist: Clay

I admire your walk
Amazed when you talk
Everything you say
Takes my breath away
All the things you do
When you don't mean to
It drives me all the way back to you

I've come so far
It's been so hard
Not being able to walk with you
Not being able to talk to you ---> (Kind of like an echo)
Not being able to see you smile
Its been such a long while
Since I've been happy at all..

You have no idea
How much you cross my mind
Just thinking about you
Gives me a feeling inside
I can't explain it
How it makes me feel
It kinda makes me think
That this might be real..


The light in your eyes
Is where the truth lies
You try to hide the pain
But you can't help but cry..
You sit and wonder why
Everyone says goodbye
Why the world is so unfair
And that you want to die..

But don't despair
There's someone there
Someone to love you
And to take care
Of all the things
That trouble you
To throw away the past
And see the world anew..


Hope you like it, let me know what you think. Be honest, I'm open to ALL criticism. (This was made for an Acoustic type of Genre)
The lyrics are not completely done, I'm looking to add one or two more verses.
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Old 06-13-2009, 02:35 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Oh guy thats totly rad dood it totly reminds me of a sonic youth early album you know? kind like blink 182 almost you no? yeh guy totly put mor stuf up
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