I know this belongs in the songwriting section but.....

Husky McDump · 06-29-2009, 09:41 PM

Hello everyone,

long time no posts.

I've been working on a song here for a while and want to see what everyone thinks just for kicks.

Landfill (Acoustic).mp3

Tell me what cha, think.

P.S.

MJ died? So did Billy Mayes?!? Wtf is the world coming to?

-Ems-

crash_override · 06-30-2009, 12:54 AM

Not too bad at all man. Its a little raw, especially the vocals. They need compression and maybe a little pitch correction. Dual track the guitar and this thing would sound golden.

SATCHMO · 06-30-2009, 01:02 AM

I like it. It is a bit raw like crash said, but it has amazing potential.

Husky McDump · 07-01-2009, 05:04 PM

changed up the vocal style, a little more controlled.

tell me what yah think.
(btw the recording i posted before is a layered recording of myself on the lead line so this is just the 1st guitar part)

Kamikazi Kat · 07-03-2009, 09:41 PM

Only listened to the youtube version, but I think its pretty good. I like the guitar work that starts around 2:48 - 4:00.

06-29-2009, 09:41 PM	#1 (permalink)
Husky McDump No Shirt Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Minneapolis, MN Posts: 442	I know this belongs in the songwriting section but..... Hello everyone, long time no posts. I've been working on a song here for a while and want to see what everyone thinks just for kicks. Landfill (Acoustic).mp3 Tell me what cha, think. P.S. MJ died? So did Billy Mayes?!? Wtf is the world coming to? -Ems- __________________ not everyone can make it to the pros, some rise to the top, others down low.

07-01-2009, 05:04 PM	#4 (permalink)
Husky McDump No Shirt Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Minneapolis, MN Posts: 442	vid changed up the vocal style, a little more controlled. tell me what yah think. (btw the recording i posted before is a layered recording of myself on the lead line so this is just the 1st guitar part) __________________ not everyone can make it to the pros, some rise to the top, others down low.

06-30-2009, 01:02 AM	#3 (permalink)
SATCHMO Al Dente Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Texas Posts: 4,708	I like it. It is a bit raw like crash said, but it has amazing potential.

07-03-2009, 09:41 PM	#5 (permalink)
Kamikazi Kat Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Michigan Posts: 329	Only listened to the youtube version, but I think its pretty good. I like the guitar work that starts around 2:48 - 4:00.