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Old 06-29-2009, 09:41 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hello everyone,

long time no posts.


I've been working on a song here for a while and want to see what everyone thinks just for kicks.


Landfill (Acoustic).mp3

Tell me what cha, think.

P.S.

MJ died? So did Billy Mayes?!? Wtf is the world coming to?


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Old 06-30-2009, 12:54 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Not too bad at all man. Its a little raw, especially the vocals. They need compression and maybe a little pitch correction. Dual track the guitar and this thing would sound golden.
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Old 06-30-2009, 01:02 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I like it. It is a bit raw like crash said, but it has amazing potential.
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Old 07-01-2009, 05:04 PM   #4 (permalink)
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changed up the vocal style, a little more controlled.

tell me what yah think.
(btw the recording i posted before is a layered recording of myself on the lead line so this is just the 1st guitar part)

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Old 07-03-2009, 09:41 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Only listened to the youtube version, but I think its pretty good. I like the guitar work that starts around 2:48 - 4:00.
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