Ricochet~kun

okay, heres an idea i got: think Santana mixed with led zeppelin, and more frustrated sounding. (and change those congas out for real drums =P)
so heres what i got:
IMPACT by Dr. Vibe

(words held, juiced for all their meaning)
i got this down right,
you've got me feeling all right,

(less held)
so you go in for the kill, before i can change my mind-
on you.

(held)
why don'tcha gimme some ground,
i know exactly why your puttin' me down...

(not)
so you can go in for the kill, be fore i can change my mind...

(held, screamed so that the microphone distorts)
I said i'm breakin' down,
got no more thinkin' mind to compromise~

(not screamed)
let's get this damn straight.
i'm not a puppet, not to you,
not to anyone.
so you better get outta my way,
i said this storm is comin' your way~

and... uh... thats it so far =P

comments, suggestions?

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VeggieLover

hmmm. strange to say the least. ill let you know...

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Rainfall

Hmm, kinda reminds me of old-school Rush. You going to actually sing this, because that would be a huge help :p

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Shivs

Just this line seems a bit akward to me, try changing that one up if you can, man. I sang the lyrics, kinda pictured their "voice", they sound good vocalized. Good work.

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