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Old 09-13-2009, 03:35 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Slime

Lifestyle of a dirty rat
secretly a dressed-up man
wanting everything he can't have
converting the rest,

Unsuspected by all
secretly wondered and awe'd
energized and frenzied
by commitment issues

I wont lose
what i have against you
move on move out
its gonna be a bloodbath

You dont understand
your crime
selfish,uncaring
your slime

Paths Jaded and ruined
secretly undone
waiting for comprising
money for your depression

laughing medicine
covers lies told to stay on top
looking for a photo finish
youve been caught (out)

I wont Lose
i what i have against you
move on move out
Its starting a crisis

you dont understand
your crime
decieving,devilsh
your Slime

You want out
of it
of what
your life is just a pit

you want out
of this
of your
life is a pit

your crime
so a wrong but you think its right
Your slime
of highest calibur

I wont lose
what i have against you
move on move out
you can here the sirens blazing, blaring out


You dont understand
your crime
****y,dirty
your slime

Not that good,But i thought id just put it up here...
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Old 09-16-2009, 12:26 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I like it, I really do.

I'm curious as to why you posted this poem.

What is it about?
When did you write it?
Is it a song or just a poem?
Is it a rap, maybe?

I'd love to learn more.
And also some more about why you capatilized some words randomly, while others stayed lowercased.

Please help. [[=
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