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kouki 10-03-2009 11:57 AM

Some stuff from me to you,skank!
 
A little background on this,I live in a bad area.This is all sh*t that ive seen and heard yada yada yada.I was thinking of changin the chorus,it seems kinda bitc*y and whiny,let me know.

Ps. Ill be moving out of this sh*t hole soon.Hopefully LOL

I woke up from my dream and into this nightmare
by the shots fired and the sound of screeching tires.
Dreams? We've all got em.
Mine just seem lost and forgotten.

I want out I want out
f*ck surviving and living without <--chorus,i guess
peace of mind peace of mind
It feels imposible to find.

Life in the beat down *****y part of town
candles and flowers lying on the ground
a place I call the land of the lost
surviving a hail of bullets,but at what cost?
living in a world where there is no change
children and mothers are going insane.

What the hell, did they kill someone else?
I guess lead in your diet is not good for your health.
Death here, death where?
Nobody saw a thing. (<--sarcastic)
Once found and not blind but they just cant see.

kouki 10-11-2009 11:33 AM

Got a few things I was writing the other night when fighting with "THE CHIC"!.Sorry if you think its cliche or this or that,but its exactly what I felt and what I was feeling.It all came natural.


Its bad enough I have to fight the demons that nest in my brain
but now I have to put up with your crying
This sh*t is driving me insane

The world feels like it tumbles down
It rests on my shoulders
thats how it feels,thats what it is
Apparently your my everything
and yet I want you to be as far away as possible.

Just let me think,let the words come out of my mouth
before you give me sh*t for what im about to say
Someone must really hate me
and planned this against me
Hopefully karma gave him what he gave me.
Fu** me looks like I already did.

Hahaha

kouki 10-11-2009 11:45 AM

Tomorrow will be another day
tonight will be a blur
Lets make this feeling last
Give me something that will wake me up
something that will make me forget

Dont know what that is,but looks like its good.
Smoke this swallow that
I really dont care,its all the same
I'll let you know how it felt,if I awake

This self destruct kind of mentality is amazing
you are my everything and yet you make me want to forget everything


:love:

OceanAndSilence 10-12-2009 12:59 PM

you called me a skank!

you seem pretty morose; i like you

Arya Stark 10-12-2009 01:13 PM

Geh. I'm sorry all of this is going on. I'm not a fan of the writing style, but it's from the heart so I can't really criticize.

kouki 10-12-2009 03:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by OceanAndSilence (Post 751006)
you called me a skank!

you seem pretty morose; i like you

Thank ya kind stranger.

kouki 10-12-2009 03:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AwwSugar (Post 751020)
Geh. I'm sorry all of this is going on. I'm not a fan of the writing style, but it's from the heart so I can't really criticize.

Dont be sorry,we're cool now.Its kinda a good thing,its fueled my creativity level a lot.Most of my stuff is in spanish,I just started writing in english a few weeks ago.Ill be getting better little by little ,hopefully.

Arya Stark 10-12-2009 04:30 PM

Ohh, it'll be exciting to see you progressing.

kouki 10-12-2009 05:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AwwSugar (Post 751209)
Ohh, it'll be exciting to see you progressing.

Yup,hay so do you play any instruments?

Arya Stark 10-12-2009 06:46 PM

Yeah, I play a couple. Do you? xD


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