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Old 02-14-2010, 03:25 PM   #1 (permalink)
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So this is my first attempt at writing a song.
Its called "Drowned"


(intro)
I haven't been focused
Ive been doin the hocus pocus
Ive been around and round
and drowned into the ground.

I felt so alone
You smell like cologne
but she can dance and sing
shes got her own thing.

(chourus)
I never dreamt of the day
Were i'd feel this way
I thought i would say
what I felt right away.

Now im laying
on the ground
I guess I was drowned
I have been clowned.
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But now im back to the beginning
I thought I was winning
but you were just kidding

(chourus)
I never dreamt of the day
Were i'd feel this way
I thought i would say
what I felt right away.

Now im laying
on the ground
I guess I was drowned
I have been clowned.

So this is the end of this journey
I thought I would be worthy
I guess you weren't trustworthy.
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Old 02-14-2010, 04:03 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Quote:
I haven't been focused
Ive been doin the hocus pocus
original line, thumbs up.
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Old 02-16-2010, 07:20 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Do you have an idea what kind of sound this song will have to it?
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