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Old 04-07-2010, 02:55 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Default The Right Piece

This is a song i wrote for my fiance Kelsie. Its got a very catchy lead line in he middle of the verses and i sing falsetto at 2 points in the chorus (bolded lines) each bolded word is held out for a measure and my vocals walk down the scale about 2 1/2 steps

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The Right Piece

If the stars could tell me
What it looked like from above
Would i be satisfied with the out-come
There's one thing I'd need to know

Chorus:
Is my Love for her gettin' weak
Or is it stronger each second i
Breath
and i hold her
Its like a puzzle, shes the right piece

Truth be told, my emotions have a hard time
The come out, in abnormal ways
It dont matter dont change
the way that i love my babe

(Chorus)

People say, the closest star to this world is the sun
They musn't know the beautiful rays of my babe

(Chorus)


thanks guys!

i have written other love songs too!!!

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