Be Honest... How do you rate my lyrics

[davidyebba]

Hi there.. new member. Been writing song lyrics for many years... even had a few recorded by artists around the world. But always feel insecure about latest song lyrics... Would love your comments about the lyrics below. thanks



Found My Baby On A Web-Site
Lyrics by David Abbey.

Copywrite February 2010.


I found my baby on a web-site,

First saw her on a screen.

Found her on a dating web-site,

The answer to all my dreams.

So glad I found that crazy web-site,

On the world wide web.

Cos thats where I found my baby,

Now my lonliness is gone and dead.




I'd gone out to meet some friends of mine,

We bought a few latte's and drank some wine.

We were in the Mall at a favourite Cafe,

Where we stayed to pass a few hours away.




Soon a good friend of mine was on-line,

Surfing sites and having a real good time.

He called me over to look at what he'd found,

It was then that my jaw kinda hit the ground.




Cos I'd found my baby on a web-site,

Saw her face on his screen.

There she was on a dating web-site,

The answer to all my dreams.

So glad he found that crazy web-site,

On the world wide web.

Cos thats where I found my baby,

Now my lonliness is gone and dead.




Someone pushed me in front of the screen,

I guess it was obvious I liked what I'd seen.

The girl seemed friendly and kinda alright,

Six hours later we reluctantly said goodnight.




Then found I that I couldn't sleep that at all,

Seemed my brain just kept climbing the wall.

Finally I just had to get up at half past three,

Couldn't figure out what was happening to me.




Was it cos I found my baby on a web-site,

Saw her face on a screen.

Talking with me from a dating web-site,

The answer to all my dreams.

So glad I found that crazy web-site,

On the world wide web.

Cos thats where I found my baby,

Now my lonliness is gone and dead.



Now that happened some months ago,

How its changed my life you'll never know.

Turned out she lived right next to me,

To be more precise on the same street.




Funny how life can turn out to be,

Seems that she had had her eye on me.

But with me being a typical dumb-ass guy,

Never saw her looking as she passed me by.




So lucky to find her on that web-site,

To See her face on that screen.

Then pick her from that dating web-site,

The answer to all my dreams.

So glad I found that crazy web-site,

On the world wide web.

Cos thats where I found my baby,

Now my lonliness is gone and dead.




So glad I found my baby on that web-site,

On the world wide web.

Yes thats where I found my loving baby,

Now my lonliness is gone and dead.

So glad that my lonliness is now gone and dead.



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Let Me Tell You.

Lyrics by David Abbey

Copywrite February 2010




Let me tell you about my love,

Let me tell you about my feelings.

Let me tell you about my love,

Its my heart that you've been stealing.




Bit by bit, day by day,

This is it, what can I say!

Each smile you give,

Just goes to prove,

Just cannot be,

Without your love.


Let me tell you about my love,

Let me tell you about my yearnings.

Let me tell you about my love,

And the emotions you've been stirring.




Bit by bit, day by day,

This is it, what can I say!

When I see you,

For the shortest moment,

Sends me crazy,

My heart into torment.




Let me tell you about my love,

Let me tell you about my dreaming.

Let me tell you about my love,

And about what I've been scheming. .




Bit by bit, day by day,

Gonna turn your head.

Till you look my way.

Then you'll just have to see,

All of this love light,

Just pouring from me,


Let me tell you about my love,

Let me tell you about my feelings.

Let me tell you about my love,

Its my heart that you've been stealing.




Bit by bit, day by day,

Gonna turn your head.

Till you look my way.

Then you'll just have to see,

All of this love light,

Just pouring from me,


I've told you about my love,

I've told you about my feelings.

I've told you about my love,

How its my heart that you've been stealing.




Now I've told you about my love,

Now I've told you about my feelings.

Now I've told you about my love,

And how its my heart and mind,

That you've been stealing.




That you've been stealing.




That you've been stealing.



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Looking Out Of My Open Window.
Lyrics by David Abbey.

Copyright March 2010.




Looking out of my open window,

At the start of another day.

People are passing my open window,

Going along their busy ways.




Just sitting here at my open window,

Praying she'll come, come my way.

For a girl passes by my window,

And smiles at me every day.

My heart she's truly captured,

Ensnared it in every way.

All I've done these past few days,

Is figure out what Im gonna say.




When she passes by my open window,

At the start of this sunny day.

Other's pass by my open window,

But its just her I want to see.




How many oysters have I had to open,

Before I found this pearl.

How many kick-backs have I had to take,

Before I found this special girl.

How many lonely taxi's,

From lonely dances,

Over the years have I had to take.

Someone just please tell me the search is over,

Tell me this is love for goodness sake.




When she passes by my open window,

At the start of this sunny day.

Other's pass by my open window,

But its just her I want to see.




Should've spent last night in dreaming,

But was wide awake all night scheming.

How am I gonna get her into my life,

How am I gonna get her be my wife.


Made many plans throughout the night,

Most of them were just a fantasy flight.

But my plan is finally made,

Just hope that things truly go my way.




Looking out of my open window,

At the start of another day.

People are passing my open window,

Going along their busy ways.




Thats why Im sitting at my open window,

At the start of another day.

Dont see the people passing by my window,

But can feel my heart racing away.

Then I see her from my open window,

Bringing her sunshine to this day,

Once again she's smiling,

The widest smile is pointed my way.




How many oysters have I had to open,

Before I found this pearl.

How many kick-backs have I had to take,

Before I found this special girl.

How many lonely taxi's,

From lonely dances,

Over the years have I had to take.

Someone just please tell me the search is over,

Tell me this is love for goodness sake.




Now she's passing my open window,

At the start of this perfect day.

I'm leaning out my open window,

Just forget what I was going to say.


But she's just stopped by my open window,

So I lean out and give her a flower,

Plus a broad smile with which to say,

Please come to my window everyday.




Looking out of my open window,

At the start of another day.

People are passing my open window,

Going along their busy ways.




Oh my god I just can't believe it,

She's leaning in through my window.

Am I truly hearing what she says,

She'll be back tomorrow and everyday.


My heart feels like its going to explode,

As my new love walks off down the road,

Seems my life has just changed forever,

All because of the flower I just gave her.






How many oysters have I had to open,

Before I found this pearl.

How many kick-backs have I had to take,

Before I found this special girl.

How many lonely taxi's,

From lonely dances,

Over the years have I had to take.

Someone just please tell me the search is over,

Tell me this is love for goodness sake.

[CAPTAIN CAVEMAN]

copyright? yea right buddy i'm going to make millions off these future hits

[Aidy]

Lol

[TheCunningStunt]

I found my baby on a web-site,

First saw her on a screen.

Found her on a dating web-site,

The answer to all my dreams.


I can't read anymore. Sorry.