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03-23-2010, 06:38 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Mar 2010
Posts: 22
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Go!Love Lyrics
New to the forum, new to writing lyrics/music...blah, blah, blah. Enough excuses. If you like the lyrics, awesome. If they happen to not be your cup of tea then please pass on your knowledge as to how to make them better.
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What can be said for those who stay silent? What will be said of those who refused to take a stand? For nothing, is all you have If you aren’t willing to bleed Just because you can’t see me Doesn’t mean I’m not here Who can this be, who burns himself alive? Who will you be, one who destroys or reconciles? For nothing, is all you have If you aren’t willing to bleed Just because you can’t see me Doesn’t mean I’m not here Doesn’t mean I’m not here Burning alive Screaming inside Building a new fire One that purifies X2 For nothing, is all I have It’s what I need to bring To keep this fire burning bright Give it all, to stay alive Give it all, to stay alive Give it all, to stay alive Give it all, to stay alive |
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03-27-2010, 02:29 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Mar 2010
Posts: 22
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I'm noticing that I'm beginning to repeat my choruses a bit, in my lyrics, more and more. It doesn't seem so bad when I sing it to myself :P
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VERSE 1 I am an endless fighter No one will match desire It's time to draw my sword and win your heart The campaign is beginning This war is one worth waging I will swing to kill for there is just one CHORUS Dangerous, dangerous love It's dangerous, dangerous love (This is) Made for us, made for us love I'm dangerous VERSE 2 You are the prize I'm seeking There is no stopping me This passion runs so deep my heart's burning I will not stop till your mine If not I'll surely die This love is what you have been waiting for -CHORUS- Dangerous, dangerous Love It's dangerous, dangerous love It's made for us, made for us I'm dangerous, dangerous BRIDGE Do you see it? What's in your way? I'm prepared to struggle I will go and seize the day -CHORUS- Dangerous, dangerous Love It's dangerous, dangerous love It's made for us, made for us I'm dangerous, dangerous |
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03-28-2010, 03:43 PM
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Instrumental Octopus
Join Date: Jan 2010
Posts: 65
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Your lyrics are pretty good, there isn't too much use of cliches and the concepts are interesting. Keep it up.
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03-29-2010, 03:25 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Mar 2010
Posts: 22
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Soul: Engage
VERSE 1 How can I be here Where You've become the sum all my fears Why is it that You Engage me on the lowest tiers Where are You, I'll show Where ever you want me to go Who are You to know The limits of my very soul I don't know How I got here CHORUS Come take my heart I won't argue There's no attempt to win back control Engage my soul Engage my soul VERSE 2 What is this, I can't define Where I have been all of my life When did you become the whole Of everything I've ever known If this is, all that there is On Earth, then why don't I give in My life is full, let's pour it out Releasing all my fear and doubt I don't know How I got here -CHORUS- |
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03-29-2010, 11:53 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Mar 2010
Posts: 22
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Thank you all very much for your encouragement! I love writing lyrics and I'll keep doing so!
This one is just one big gooey love song. Not usually my style but I'm a closet romantic... -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=--=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- Love at First Sight
VERSE 1 Your eyes, they over power me Hair in waves breaking from the sea Your smile brings me to bended knee Your love's spread over me CHORUS You arise like the dawn You're as fair as the moon You're as bright as the sun This is love at first sight VERSE 2 We play amongst the singing trees Dance in fields as far as I can see You're oh so beautiful I believe You're sent here to captivate me -CHORUS- VERSE 3 Your lips like wine, so soft and sweet Your kisses soft, trailing over me Please God don't let this be a dream Cause with You my life is so complete -CHORUS- |
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03-31-2010, 12:56 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Mar 2010
Posts: 22
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I'm almost finished with the music for this song and I'm so excited because this will be the first song I've written that will have music accompanying it.
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VERSE 1 First my ears, turn down And my eyes, close down Then my heart, shuts down I am dying for love CHORUS Please renew Please renew I declare that I am fallen Please renew And fix what I have broken VERSE 2 First my heart, melts down And my eyes, look down Then my ears, drop down I am dying for love -CHORUS- May I decrease So you increase Nations will fall Glory to the Lord -CHORUS- Last edited by Go!Love; 03-31-2010 at 03:52 PM. |
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04-01-2010, 12:17 AM
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Groupie
Join Date: Mar 2010
Posts: 22
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So yeah, I just put out my first song, based on the lyrics above. Give it a listen if you dare...
SoundClick artist: GoLove - Renew |
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