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lacrymosa 04-20-2010 05:40 PM

Few poems... Not awesome but they're mine! Wat do u peeps think?
 
Sorrowful

You do it me once again...
You leave me here inside
Estranged in sorrowful nightmares
Just me alone again...
The ghosts around me sing...
A lament so sad and sweet...
That's the way you make me feel...
When i am drowning in your sweet, sweet lies...
I thought i knew the meaning of love...
A state of bliss somewhere high above...
The world and pain couldn't reach us with its misery...
You stole my heart again...
Right from deep within...
My chest is tight
And i can't breathe again

Kognitiva 04-23-2010 02:23 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by lacrymosa (Post 853919)


My chest is tight
And i can't breathe again


really love this part : > great stuff keep it up! : >

bubu 04-23-2010 11:21 AM

Sorrowful stuff was never my thing but yours really touched me, thanks.


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