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Old 04-20-2010, 05:40 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Post Few poems... Not awesome but they're mine! Wat do u peeps think?

Sorrowful

You do it me once again...
You leave me here inside
Estranged in sorrowful nightmares
Just me alone again...
The ghosts around me sing...
A lament so sad and sweet...
That's the way you make me feel...
When i am drowning in your sweet, sweet lies...
I thought i knew the meaning of love...
A state of bliss somewhere high above...
The world and pain couldn't reach us with its misery...
You stole my heart again...
Right from deep within...
My chest is tight
And i can't breathe again

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Old 04-23-2010, 02:23 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by lacrymosa View Post


My chest is tight
And i can't breathe again

really love this part : > great stuff keep it up! : >
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Old 04-23-2010, 11:21 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Sorrowful stuff was never my thing but yours really touched me, thanks.
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