Second attempt for happy song
 

Hey people!! :banghead: My second attempt for a happy song so yea.... please tell me what you think, I hope it is better than the previous ones i wrote!!!! {IN MY OPINION: It sounds more like a poem than a song:banghead:}

You
You told me you love me
And I believe you
You told me you would never leave me
And I want to let you know
I love you too

My heart has taken flight
You became my light
At last I can breathe
At last I can see

You always held me tightly
I forgot to breathe
I'd like to drift away
To our special place
In this world where every thing
Doesn't make sense

You were always there for me
It's impossible to live in a world without you
You are my cure for the disease
What makes me right
I need you too

My pain has eased
My sorrow has ceased
I'm forgetting to breathe
When it's you I see

You always held me tightly
I forgot to breathe
I'd like to drift away
To our special place
In this world where every thing
Doesn't make sense (X2)

Giving me a reason to live
Giving me the air I need to live
I'd like to be with you when I sleep
And when I wake up it's like i never stopped dreaming

You always held me
I forget to breathe you in
Let's drift away
To our safe place
From this world where everything
Doesn't make sense

What would you think if any of us forumites would steal some of your lines for our "own" songs? Seriously!

PD: Loved your work.

That's a successful attempt(it's happy alright)! Likin' your lyrics!

Thanx!!! I feel more realived now to get my $20 back!!! lol

depends, do i get credit? do i get guareenteed fame as well???? ha lol no seriously, no lie, do I? If not, I need a way to protect my work!!!!!! >(

I like this very much. Especially this verse, it's really creative and I love the twist at the end. Thanks for sharing this.

- Hoobie Goobie :)

Thanx a bunch means a lot :)

Yoosa be good, you should continue, I'll be looking with interest.

muchas gracias!!!! thanx I do hope I can keep your interest, liked to hear feedback more often, like to hear what you honestly think

Bored again, didn't want to write about love instead I wrote something...I don't know
 

Yesterday, Today and Tomorrow

We can't make up what was done
You can regret what you said
but I can't make the pain disappear
Just because yesterday was done

We have to say is and will
Not was because
It already was, but it is right now and it will be

There's no such thing as yesterday
If we can't change it
It's only today
It's only tomorrow

I was with you yesterday
But I'm alone today
I might be there tomorrow
I might be alone tommorow

But I can't change the past
So I have to say is and will
Not was because
It already was, but it is right now and it will be

There's no such thing as yesterday
If we can't change it
It's only today
It's only tomorrow
It's only today and tomorrow

The past is the past
and we have to live
The present and future
The past is the past
and we can't live yesterday

There's no yesterday
If we can't change it
It's only today
It's only tomorrow
It's only

I can't change what I said
I can regret what I said
I wish I could take it back
But now we both have to live with what we said