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DiegoArmando 07-10-2010 07:57 PM

You
 
Since I've been doing my fair share of criticising I thought I'd post one of my somber works to give you the chance to flame me.

You

It’s raining in my heart today
You’re never here, you’re always far away
The ravens crow, lashed by the rain
A misty view I see again
You never called to me before
Inclement days seen from my door
Just thoughts of you, on my mind dwell
Stopped in my tracks, can't hear the bell
The thunder cracks above my head
The lightning strikes where Wallace bled
I miss you here, your healing kind
There’s nothing left but in my mind
Return to me, you are the one
My solitary days, by you undone
Stand with me, here by my side
To live a life so filled with pride.



Janszoon 07-10-2010 07:58 PM

Me?

Freebase Dali 07-10-2010 08:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Janszoon (Post 897992)
Me?

No, me.

Janszoon 07-10-2010 08:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Freebase Dali (Post 897994)
No, me.

Oh ok. Nevermind then.

Freebase Dali 07-10-2010 08:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Janszoon (Post 897995)
Oh ok. Nevermind then.

If you re-read it, it can be you again if you like.

Janszoon 07-10-2010 08:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Freebase Dali (Post 897996)
If you re-read it, it can be you again if you like.

That's okay. I'm passing the mantle to you.

DiegoArmando 07-10-2010 08:12 PM

narcissistic prick..of course it's not about you.

Freebase Dali 07-10-2010 08:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Janszoon (Post 897997)
That's okay. I'm passing the mantle to you.

:(

Please someone else read it.

Janszoon 07-10-2010 08:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DiegoArmando (Post 898000)
narcissistic prick..of course it's not about you.

Who?

DiegoArmando 07-10-2010 08:14 PM

you


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