princeh

hey guys,

anyone wanna tell me what they think of my first verse of my remix to Just the Way you Are by Bruno Mars? Thanks in advance

I’d like to tell you something but I figure you're aware,
Your eyes are like the stars, and perfect is your hair
The way your smile shines, baby isn’t even fair
Unique, you’re the only girl that has this kind of flair

As I get this out, I’m lookin’ at you
Cause no one ever makes me feel the way you do
Beautiful, flawless, nothing short of stunning
For you, to the moon, I would never stop running

You’re amazing smile, and your sentiments are sweet
So many girls out there and you’ve got them all beat
The look you give me causes me to blank out
Its eating me inside so I wanna scream and shout

Eight letters, three words, one meaning
Love let it be; no intervening
Please tell me you’re aren’t planning on leavin
Cause baby, when I see you’re face…

I've never really written anything before, this just kinda flowed out when thinking about a specific person... haha