Is It Enough for Angels?

link0521 · 09-17-2010, 12:33 PM

This is the first song I post here. Any comment would be welcome.

Name: Is It Enought For Angels?

This story started with a
"Once upon a time"
But, I don't know how would it end
I'm not the writer nor the narrator
Even though, I only hope it ends with a
"Happily ever after"

I believe in what you've shown me:
you teach me how to rise up,
how to open my eyes up
Sometimes I think you always knew
that the only truth I see is you
You're all I need to know

Even if we are miles apart
I feel you closer than you are
You stole my soul to set me free
You're my inspiration
As I stand against this world
If you leave, will the darkness be too much?

I would like to be your poet
to write the things you wanna read
I want you to be my muse
To write the things I feel for you
So tell me if you can hear these words tonight
Would these words I write ever mean enough?
Will I ever be enough?

It would kill me to see you go after all this time
None of us thought it could end this way
It's the kind of ending, people don't want to see
'Cause it's tragedy and it'll only bring you down
Never wanted this, never want to see you hurt
Every little bump in the road i tried to swerve
Result in a tragic ending

I never thought I'd need you there when I cry
And the days feel like years when I'm alone
When you're gone,
The pieces of my heart are missing you
Everything that I do reminds me of you
Do you see how much I need you right now?

right here with you is where I belong
I'll lose my mind if I can't see you
without you there is nothing in this life
that would make life worth living for
I can't bear the thought of you not there
I can't fight what I feel anymore

I would like to be your poet
to write the things you wanna read
I want you to be my muse
To write the things I feel for you
So tell me if you can hear these words tonight
Would these words I write ever mean enough?
Will I ever be enough?

This gonna sound kinda silly:
I'm not Romeo
So I can't promise you
an eternal love
But I can promise you:
"I'll love you til the day
My heart stops beating"

Even if I end up with a broken heart, I won't lie
I don't wanna hear a goodbye
but either way I'll be alright
If I could say what I wanted to say:
You’re all I’m thinking of
I'm so glad I found an angel
I'll never forget you

sorana · 09-21-2010, 04:38 AM

Nice, I would love to listen this song.

spitzaer · 10-18-2010, 12:11 AM

i wonder how this would sound. But one thing's for sure, it is deep from the heart.

link0521 · 10-18-2010, 09:12 PM

Hi spitzaer,
I think on it with a balad or soft rock style. And thanks, it really is. I wrote it one night when I was thinking on a very important person for me.

Hi Sorana,
I'm working on the sound, but I'm not a great composer so... it will take me a little time, plus I gotta lot of paperworks and exams at college.

09-17-2010, 12:33 PM	#1 (permalink)
link0521 Groupie Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 5	Is It Enough for Angels? This is the first song I post here. Any comment would be welcome. Name: Is It Enought For Angels? This story started with a "Once upon a time" But, I don't know how would it end I'm not the writer nor the narrator Even though, I only hope it ends with a "Happily ever after" I believe in what you've shown me: you teach me how to rise up, how to open my eyes up Sometimes I think you always knew that the only truth I see is you You're all I need to know Even if we are miles apart I feel you closer than you are You stole my soul to set me free You're my inspiration As I stand against this world If you leave, will the darkness be too much? I would like to be your poet to write the things you wanna read I want you to be my muse To write the things I feel for you So tell me if you can hear these words tonight Would these words I write ever mean enough? Will I ever be enough? It would kill me to see you go after all this time None of us thought it could end this way It's the kind of ending, people don't want to see 'Cause it's tragedy and it'll only bring you down Never wanted this, never want to see you hurt Every little bump in the road i tried to swerve Result in a tragic ending I never thought I'd need you there when I cry And the days feel like years when I'm alone When you're gone, The pieces of my heart are missing you Everything that I do reminds me of you Do you see how much I need you right now? right here with you is where I belong I'll lose my mind if I can't see you without you there is nothing in this life that would make life worth living for I can't bear the thought of you not there I can't fight what I feel anymore I would like to be your poet to write the things you wanna read I want you to be my muse To write the things I feel for you So tell me if you can hear these words tonight Would these words I write ever mean enough? Will I ever be enough? This gonna sound kinda silly: I'm not Romeo So I can't promise you an eternal love But I can promise you: "I'll love you til the day My heart stops beating" Even if I end up with a broken heart, I won't lie I don't wanna hear a goodbye but either way I'll be alright If I could say what I wanted to say: You’re all I’m thinking of I'm so glad I found an angel I'll never forget you Last edited by link0521; 09-17-2010 at 12:42 PM.

09-21-2010, 04:38 AM	#2 (permalink)
sorana Groupie Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 11	Nice, I would love to listen this song. __________________ [link removed by mod, no advertising]

10-18-2010, 12:11 AM	#3 (permalink)
spitzaer Groupie Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 25	i wonder how this would sound. But one thing's for sure, it is deep from the heart.

10-18-2010, 09:12 PM	#4 (permalink)
link0521 Groupie Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 5	Hi spitzaer, I think on it with a balad or soft rock style. And thanks, it really is. I wrote it one night when I was thinking on a very important person for me. Hi Sorana, I'm working on the sound, but I'm not a great composer so... it will take me a little time, plus I gotta lot of paperworks and exams at college.