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Old 09-29-2010, 03:47 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Cool My Award-Winning Poem

I submitted this poem to a local competition and won the prize of $50

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trees are trash
man is victim
temptation played the vandal

trees are trash
venus flytrap
crows call here and there

trees are trash
time fills the cup
their lies hurt my body

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what do you think
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Old 10-18-2010, 12:10 AM   #2 (permalink)
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congratulatons.
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Old 10-18-2010, 12:46 AM   #3 (permalink)
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It's frustratingly short

Well done.
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Old 10-19-2010, 07:11 PM   #4 (permalink)
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awesome. it would sound really cool with a beat behind it. what you do with the 50 bucks :P
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Old 10-20-2010, 01:44 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I'd say thats a poem worth at least $50.
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Old 10-20-2010, 09:43 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I submitted this poem to a local competition and won the prize of $50

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trees are trash
man is victim
temptation played the vandal

trees are trash
venus flytrap
crows call here and there

trees are trash
time fills the cup
their lies hurt my body

----

what do you think
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Old 10-20-2010, 11:04 PM   #7 (permalink)
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50 dollars was obviously the consolation prize.
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Old 10-21-2010, 01:13 AM   #8 (permalink)
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I'm not really into poetry, but I'm not a huge fan. Doesn't make a bit of sense to me.

But congrats on your $50!!
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