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Old 12-21-2010, 04:14 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Here are the lyrics of a song of ours that we intend to record in January. What do you think? Any comments? Looking forward to hearing from you!

Look What the Cat's Dragged in Tonight

Hey, I was fine!
Chatting with my girlfriends
And sipping at my wine.
Now, here's this bloke!
He's getting on my nerves
Is this somebody's joke?
He tries to impress me,
But what a perfect creep!
If there was a window
I think that I would leap.

Chorus:

Look what the cat's dragged in tonight!
He doesn't even feel my spite.
Such a pain in the back –
He will make me crack!


He's been going on for hours now
About his smashing car
And him being such a star.
I would run a mile to get some peace…
You sir, save me please,
Just tell him I'm your niece.
Now he dares to touch me!
Well this is where I scream
I'll throw the drink in his face
Just to let off some steam!

Chorus:

Look what the cat's dragged in tonight!
He doesn't even feel my spite.
Such a pain in the back –
He will make me crack!

Oh, if only he would go away!
Maybe a Chinese torture treatment
Wouldn't make him want to stay
Or if I could feed him to the rats
Anything at all, not to have to suffer that
What a great world that would be if I could feel so free
And there were no men like that
Then halleluia – liberty!
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Old 12-29-2010, 07:46 AM   #12 (permalink)
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I've changed quite a few of the lyrics. What do you think.? Any feedback appreciated!

Look What the Cat's Dragged in Tonight

Hey, I was fine!
Chatting with my girlfriends
And sipping at my wine.
Now, here's this bloke!
He's getting on my nerves
Is this somebody's joke?
He looks like a blind man
who must have dressed alone
He feels like a super hero
But My he's badly drawn.

Chorus:

Look what the cat's dragged in tonight!
He doesn't even feel my spite.
Such a pain in the back –
He will make me crack!

I have had the time to count his hair,
To check the fire exit
To see how the others are happy where
he's not
I guess St Francis would have known
how you could trick this creature
to let us do the show.
Now he dares to touch me!
Well this is where I scream
I'll throw the drink in his face
Just to let off some steam!

Chorus:

Look what the cat's dragged in tonight!
He doesn't even feel my spite.
Such a pain in the back –
He will make me crack!

Oh, if only he would go away!
Maybe a Chinese torture treatment
Wouldn't make him want to stay
Or if I could feed him to the rats
Anything at all, not to have to suffer that
What a great world that would be if I could feel so free
And there were no men like that
Then halleluia – liberty!
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