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Old 11-13-2010, 01:27 PM   #1 (permalink)
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In a former existence, I was a bard, a teller of tales, a public stroller extolling the virtues of higher ideals in colorful tights and pantaloons, and now, I think it is time that I thoughtfully and thoroughly expose you to that softer more expressive side of myself.

Some, like this one, are performance pieces iv'e done, others are just jotted little trinkets, and others are just, well, other. I'll add to it at my leisure or as your gratuitous awe and admiration merits. Enjoy.



Love Story


we were...

Artist and Arsonists
we soaked our catharsis in kerosene and arsenic
Rags for Molotov cocktails
set sail into
gated communities and corporate prisons

we were...
Artists and Arsonists
Artists and Arsonists

We got high
on second-hand fermeldehyde and screw-top wine
Baptized in the sun dried cesspool
it was too much to stay alive sometimes
We were dyin’

we were...
Artists and Arsonists
Artists and Arsonists

We dropped BOMBS on the Pyramids of Giza!
We dropped BOMBS on the surface of the sun!
We dropped BOMBS on the White House lawn!
We torched the stoic roadhouse and skipped town by dawn!

We were...
Artists and Arsonists
Artists and Arsonists

And we didn’t genuflect to NOBODY!

....We were in love.
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Old 11-13-2010, 02:15 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Whoa, I was blown away by that opening line.

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Old 11-13-2010, 02:58 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Not to be a cock but isn't it "arsonists", with an O not an E?

Pretty cool though, I'd love to hear it in song form.
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Old 11-13-2010, 03:03 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Not to be a cock but isn't it "arsonists", with an O not an E?
Maybe this answers the question:
"we soaked our catharsis in kerosene and arsenic"
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Old 11-13-2010, 03:10 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Maybe this answers the question:
"we soaked our catharsis in kerosene and arsenic"
So it's a reference to arsenic?
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Old 11-13-2010, 03:19 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I was just thinking maybe it's a wordplay. But it might be just a mistake. I don't know.
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Old 11-13-2010, 03:22 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I was just thinking maybe it's a wordplay. But it might be just a mistake. I don't know.
Maybe you're right.

Sorry for being lame, Satch!
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Old 11-13-2010, 03:36 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Maybe you're right.

Sorry for being lame, Satch!
No... You're actually right. it's unintentionally mispelled. I can't believe that I never caught it.

It wouldn't make for a good song and I don't think I'd want to throw a beat over it or turn it into one. Performed it clocks it at just over a minute. When I originally performed it I brought my marginally schizophrenic friend Aaron with me and I'll never forget walking off the stage and him coming up to me and saying, "Man, it was like you was cornered by the cops up there and you was ready to fight every single one of em' till you found that pocket to make your getaway". I think his words really do a lot of justice to the poems tone and dynamic.
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Old 11-14-2010, 12:29 PM   #9 (permalink)
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This was performed 2 years ago in Portland, ME. The whole performance was basically me trying not to lose it, but it was well received.



Ariel

Rrarr Rrarr!!!!
That was your first decree
to me

And I crouched holding you...gently
These two hands,
severed the cord, and
the painted hardwoods beneath my curled toes
turned to dust.

Ariel

With galaxies twirling in my eyes
I held you up to an adoring sky, and whispered,

“Behold the only thing greater than yourself.”

Ariel

My Lioness of Judah
I confess to you
what my words won’t yet allow...

Ariel

This world is yours, baby girl
The world is yours.


Rrarrr Rrarrr!!!!
And your love will be a beacon
and they will come to you
in tattered rags and battered boats
and settle on your shores.


Rrarr Rrarr!!!!
Simone, and they will listen
Your truth, your light will glisten
like dewdrops on a lotus
like diamond in the sun.


Rrarr Rrarr!!!!
And the loudspeakers will fall from the minarets
And they will see your silhouette
dancing before the daybreak
And raising up your voice...


Rrarr Rrarr!!!!
And my world was no longer mine
And our journey was just beginning
I held you to my chest
Counted all my blessings, and
My ears could hear the adhān...

There is none greater...
There is none greater...
there is none greater...

Ariel

The world is yours.
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Old 11-14-2010, 12:35 PM   #10 (permalink)
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woooow, both of those are great!!! i really like em alot. post more soon please

i really enjoyed reading these.
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