MisterFuzzyHead

Video Included Below if I did it right lol


I thought a million ways
ways that I could change
I wish my life could bring
a way to set it straight

Never knowing love
or anything between
Living day by day
a Future unforeseen

I can handle the blade
I can handle to screams
I can't handle the way
that the loneliness it brings

I can handle the blade
I can handle to screams
I can't handle the way
that the loneliness it brings

I see my reflection
I don't know who I am
It's really hard to mention
The life that I've lived

Can I forgive myself
My life is in dismay
When my body goes to hell
My memory remains

I can handle the blade
I can handle to screams
I can't handle the way
that the loneliness it brings

I can handle the blade
I can handle to screams
I can't handle the way
that the loneliness it brings

Never knowing love
or anything between
Living day by day
a Future unforeseen

-I can handle the blade
I can handle to screams
I can't handle the way
that the loneliness it brings-

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Freebase Dali

Sure didn't.

MisterFuzzyHead

How do you do it - I followed the youtube instructions?

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It's different here.
But I dunno, man... seems like clever spam/plug promo to me. I'm loathe to actually give you information that will contradict the very rules I'm supposed to enforce... Hrmmmm

MisterFuzzyHead

The facebook post was and sorry but this is for a review of lyrics AND I put it in the right category - I supplied the video just because I had one - I have another song I'd like a review on also - we are gearing up to write an album and I'd like to know what people think of our lyrics

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Freebase Dali

Reviews don't go in this section.
Lyrics are ok, but we try to minimize people coming in to promote their music. As long as you're not here to specifically do that, you're ok.

MisterFuzzyHead

please explain what I quoted below! Its where this thread IS lol UGH

"Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry (13 Viewing)
Develop your lyrics and poetry here and get reviews."

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Freebase Dali

Reviews of lyrics and poetry, yes.
Reviews of music, no.

So um... why the music video?
The reason I'm bringing this up, is because this section is easily exploited as a spam section due to the ambiguity of the way people interpret this section. It's easy to misunderstand, and we're working on it.

For now, just do what you gotta do. I just wanted to give you a heads up.

MisterFuzzyHead

I can just put lyrics no biggie - I didn't want a review of the music lol We are re-doing the song and I was wondering about what people thought about the lyrics - We have the creativity but are grammar sucks - - I placed the video just in case someone wanted to see/hear it in context - my fault lol I know now -

um I'll re post a different one so I get reviews - I don't think anyone will review this one now lol

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Freebase Dali

You may not have gotten a lot of hits to begin with. Generally, the attitude is the same throughout this whole community; we respond more to participants. Just a heads up. Sorry if it seems like I was singling you out or something, but we really do get a lot of people who are just here to promote their band, so it pays to be responsive like you have, and I'm sure we all appreciate that.