AJNotion

I would like to share with you some lyrics my band and I have been writing. They may not make sense to some people but I hope you enjoy!

I can’t survive, I can’t survive
With the war you’re waging,
What chance have I, What chance have I?
In the middle of us, in the middle of us,
Can you feel the heart beat fading,
I carry the cross, I carry the cross,
Reached out too late to save me,

In the middle of us in the middle of us,
We hang on to all of those departed,
Walking empty streets, Trail these endless lines,
No chance to end what we started and I,
I feel the walk, the dreams become an endless sleep
And lies begun, A moments breath, its all undone,
Thoughts that fall unto the sun

Step inside to something better,
Coinside to form a river,
By design, what your soul can feel,
We’re still alive, what is this?
To breathe and cry, just to exist,
By design, what your soul can feel

I feel the walk, the dreams become an endless sleep
And lies begun, A moments breath, its all undone,
Thoughts that fall unto the sun

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Atrocious

I'd ditch that bolded line. Sounds good though, you're a rocker yeah?

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blastingas10

Pretty damn good

Nirvana90210

not trying to be mean but the lyrics need some work