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Frownland 11-06-2011 10:12 AM

I Need a Title
 
I am powerful over this
So
Called
Addiction.
I have come to this contemplation
Of addiction only
Because the word has been shoved down my throat.
Not until I changed did
I find what I was looking for.
Lost in the fields of disreality
Did I crave reality all the more.
The same reality they told me
I was running away from.
Theft lies in the past, and the ever approaching future.
Theft is not my admission to ill-controllable lifestyle,
More of a lack of moral compass.
Coming to terms with myself and
All
That
They
Say
I
AM NOT.
I find
What
I
AM.
Did the thought ever stream my consciousness?
How did they follow me here?
Am I really lost?
This higher power isn't helping at all.
Even as I understand it.
Powerful over my addiction
If it is even there.

I need a title for these lyrics, can anyone help me with this?

Atrocious 01-05-2012 06:01 PM

Honestly I think it needs a few more lines. As for a title....howabout "A Word"? Could be read as "a word" or "A, word"-as in addiction. Or maybe "A Craving"

klacc 01-24-2012 01:13 PM

I am.

Trick Bastard 01-25-2012 01:22 PM

I would say "Addiction". It's the one word that repeats throughout the song that has some sort of catch to it.

Good job!

musicman23 01-28-2012 04:23 AM

I agree with Trick on "Addiction". Unless you want something more creative: A.D.D.I.C.T:
All Dreams Die In Crashing Times - "Run For Your Life, Make Music Til You Die", Z.G.

Mr November 01-28-2012 07:28 PM

For some reason I like the title "Theft" It gets repeated in those two lines. But in an abstract way it also describes part of the theme of the lyrics if I understand them right.

If the above is true, then that title would represent the deeper meaning of the lyrics rather than just labelling it a song about addiction which sort of pigeon holes it.

Frownland 01-28-2012 09:00 PM

Thanks for all of the suggestions guys. I'm liking "Theft" especially, that ties in perfectly IMO.


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