I Need a Title

**Frownland** · 11-06-2011, 10:12 AM

I am powerful over this
So
Called
Addiction.
I have come to this contemplation
Of addiction only
Because the word has been shoved down my throat.
Not until I changed did
I find what I was looking for.
Lost in the fields of disreality
Did I crave reality all the more.
The same reality they told me
I was running away from.
Theft lies in the past, and the ever approaching future.
Theft is not my admission to ill-controllable lifestyle,
More of a lack of moral compass.
Coming to terms with myself and
All
That
They
Say
I
AM NOT.
I find
What
I
AM.
Did the thought ever stream my consciousness?
How did they follow me here?
Am I really lost?
This higher power isn't helping at all.
Even as I understand it.
Powerful over my addiction
If it is even there.

I need a title for these lyrics, can anyone help me with this?

Atrocious · 01-05-2012, 06:01 PM

Honestly I think it needs a few more lines. As for a title....howabout "A Word"? Could be read as "a word" or "A, word"-as in addiction. Or maybe "A Craving"

klacc · 01-24-2012, 01:13 PM

I am.

Trick Bastard · 01-25-2012, 01:22 PM

I would say "Addiction". It's the one word that repeats throughout the song that has some sort of catch to it.

Good job!

musicman23 · 01-28-2012, 04:23 AM

I agree with Trick on "Addiction". Unless you want something more creative: A.D.D.I.C.T:
All Dreams Die In Crashing Times - "Run For Your Life, Make Music Til You Die", Z.G.

Mr November · 01-28-2012, 07:28 PM

For some reason I like the title "Theft" It gets repeated in those two lines. But in an abstract way it also describes part of the theme of the lyrics if I understand them right.

If the above is true, then that title would represent the deeper meaning of the lyrics rather than just labelling it a song about addiction which sort of pigeon holes it.

**Frownland** · 01-28-2012, 09:00 PM

Thanks for all of the suggestions guys. I'm liking "Theft" especially, that ties in perfectly IMO.

11-06-2011, 10:12 AM	#1 (permalink)
Frownland SOPHIE FOREVER Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: East of the Southern North American West Posts: 35,548	I Need a Title I am powerful over this So Called Addiction. I have come to this contemplation Of addiction only Because the word has been shoved down my throat. Not until I changed did I find what I was looking for. Lost in the fields of disreality Did I crave reality all the more. The same reality they told me I was running away from. Theft lies in the past, and the ever approaching future. Theft is not my admission to ill-controllable lifestyle, More of a lack of moral compass. Coming to terms with myself and All That They Say I AM NOT. I find What I AM. Did the thought ever stream my consciousness? How did they follow me here? Am I really lost? This higher power isn't helping at all. Even as I understand it. Powerful over my addiction If it is even there. I need a title for these lyrics, can anyone help me with this?

01-05-2012, 06:01 PM	#2 (permalink)
Atrocious Blastphemist the Xist Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: Pine Island, FL Posts: 100	Honestly I think it needs a few more lines. As for a title....howabout "A Word"? Could be read as "a word" or "A, word"-as in addiction. Or maybe "A Craving" __________________ Be not ashamed of mistakes and thus make them crimes.-Confucius Talking much about oneself can also be a means to conceal oneself.-Friedrich Nietzsche Now hatred is by far the longest pleasure; men love in haste but they detest at leisure.-Lord Byron Popularity's bad for you. I avoid it like the plague.-Brian Mulrooney

01-24-2012, 01:13 PM	#3 (permalink)
klacc Groupie Join Date: Nov 2011 Posts: 30	I am. __________________ [link removed by mod, no advertising]

01-25-2012, 01:22 PM	#4 (permalink)
Trick Bastard Groupie Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: Hollywood, CA Posts: 9	I would say "Addiction". It's the one word that repeats throughout the song that has some sort of catch to it. Good job! __________________ Trick Bastard, arrogant ****in' rock n roll! "Silly Rabbit... Tricks are for bastards!"

01-28-2012, 09:00 PM	#7 (permalink)
Frownland SOPHIE FOREVER Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: East of the Southern North American West Posts: 35,548	Thanks for all of the suggestions guys. I'm liking "Theft" especially, that ties in perfectly IMO. __________________ Studies show that when a given norm is changed in the face of the unchanging, the remaining contradictions will parallel the truth. d e a f b o x

01-28-2012, 04:23 AM	#5 (permalink)
musicman23 Groupie Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: GA Posts: 1	I agree with Trick on "Addiction". Unless you want something more creative: A.D.D.I.C.T: All Dreams Die In Crashing Times - "Run For Your Life, Make Music Til You Die", Z.G.

01-28-2012, 07:28 PM	#6 (permalink)
Mr November Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Halifax, Canada Posts: 429	For some reason I like the title "Theft" It gets repeated in those two lines. But in an abstract way it also describes part of the theme of the lyrics if I understand them right. If the above is true, then that title would represent the deeper meaning of the lyrics rather than just labelling it a song about addiction which sort of pigeon holes it.