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Old 04-16-2012, 03:50 PM   #11 (permalink)
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It really is. She has some good lyricism sometimes.
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Old 04-17-2012, 12:04 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Please give me advice on how to make it better im not really sure what im doing but im having fun with it


blunted in the bomb shelter/
helter skelter/ chiefin pixie dust thats
jack white/
dead weather/
act right
leisure weezer/ making songs about a
****ing hash pipe

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but hey.. its white person
tatted
see me on the block/lookin kinda sad/holdin a

semi/automatic/
fantastic damage
sexy? im bringin back tragic
just kiddin tho im chilling bro
really tho rappers lyrics are
immatireal
gimme all yo money and gimmmey all yo residuals
who gives a shit
im ignorant
Bold - I really liked this part, when I rapped it in my head it sounded right good.

Italics - I got really confused at this bit, mostly the "see me on the block/lookin kinda sad/holdin a" part, I felt as if I got lost and had to read over it a good few times but that could just be me not grasping the flow there.

Hat's off for having the courage to post your work

edit: I'm sorry for such a poor insight btw, I'm absolutely horrendous with words.
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Old 04-22-2012, 05:07 PM   #13 (permalink)
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I cant rap
i smoke crack
and rhyme rap
with crack
and call it a rap

thats some nas **** right there
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Old 04-22-2012, 05:11 PM   #14 (permalink)
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^That verse just put you in my top 5 rappers of all time.
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Old 04-22-2012, 05:16 PM   #15 (permalink)
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heres the version for the remix

i cant rap
woop woop
i smoke crack
swag ching-ching
and rhyme rap
STOP(danny brown voice)
with crack
trill
and call it a woop woop rap swag
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