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Old 05-09-2005, 01:56 PM   #1 (permalink)
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The love is dead
It has died and gone
never froget
that nothing is wrong

count the petals one by one
love off love on
that is all you can depend on

crush the dream embrace the cold
in the end thats all yo hold
tear apart the flower oh so bold
hear the screams the tales they told

the fallen petals bleed and die
and all you do is let out a sigh
ignore their cry, suffering and sad
all of this means that nothing is bad

the flowers lie
petals betrayed
lying pleading their case abrupt
Do not listen their tales corrupt
tals of love and fairy tales
lies of lust their words portrail

the love is dead
it has died and gone
never forget that nothing is wrong

Rip up the plant
and bleed it dry
now is the time
to love or die!
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Old 05-09-2005, 01:58 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I love it... I really do. Well done.
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Old 05-09-2005, 02:34 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Good effort... sounds like a sad song.
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Old 05-09-2005, 03:30 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Pretty good stuff you got going.
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Old 05-09-2005, 05:57 PM   #5 (permalink)
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everyone is so good at writing songs/poems.. i have written a few things, i think they kinda suck. oh well.
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Old 05-09-2005, 06:52 PM   #6 (permalink)
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everyone is so good at writing songs/poems.. i have written a few things, i think they kinda suck. oh well.
Post it up. It might be better than what you think.
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Old 05-09-2005, 07:01 PM   #7 (permalink)
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.... maybe later. plus i feel retarded posting it.
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Old 05-10-2005, 10:55 AM   #8 (permalink)
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the song has some cliched lines but overall it isn't bad. is there any music to it or is it a poem?
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Old 05-20-2005, 09:50 PM   #9 (permalink)
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it's alright.
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Old 05-21-2005, 11:54 AM   #10 (permalink)
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i rather like it. it has a nice vibe to it. what kind of music is it for?
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