Love Is Dead(L.I.D.) (quote, songs)

Ma Cherie · 05-09-2005, 12:56 PM

The love is dead
It has died and gone
never froget
that nothing is wrong

count the petals one by one
love off love on
that is all you can depend on

crush the dream embrace the cold
in the end thats all yo hold
tear apart the flower oh so bold
hear the screams the tales they told

the fallen petals bleed and die
and all you do is let out a sigh
ignore their cry, suffering and sad
all of this means that nothing is bad

the flowers lie
petals betrayed
lying pleading their case abrupt
Do not listen their tales corrupt
tals of love and fairy tales
lies of lust their words portrail

the love is dead
it has died and gone
never forget that nothing is wrong

Rip up the plant
and bleed it dry
now is the time
to love or die!

ArtistInTheAmbulance · 05-09-2005, 12:58 PM

I love it... I really do. Well done.

coffeeshop · 05-09-2005, 01:34 PM

Good effort... sounds like a sad song.

SEVRINLEADER · 05-09-2005, 02:30 PM

Pretty good stuff you got going.

.angie. · 05-09-2005, 04:57 PM

everyone is so good at writing songs/poems.. i have written a few things, i think they kinda suck. oh well.

SEVRINLEADER · 05-09-2005, 05:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by .angie.

everyone is so good at writing songs/poems.. i have written a few things, i think they kinda suck. oh well.

Post it up. It might be better than what you think.

.angie. · 05-09-2005, 06:01 PM

.... maybe later. plus i feel retarded posting it.

riseagainstrocks · 05-10-2005, 09:55 AM

the song has some cliched lines but overall it isn't bad. is there any music to it or is it a poem?

aclotm · 05-20-2005, 08:50 PM

it's alright.

Imonlydancing · 05-21-2005, 10:54 AM

i rather like it. it has a nice vibe to it. what kind of music is it for?

05-09-2005, 12:56 PM	#1 (permalink)
Ma Cherie The Forums Sadistic Ghost Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: beyond midnight, in the abyss of time, the syren in the night Posts: 457	Love Is Dead(L.I.D.) The love is dead It has died and gone never froget that nothing is wrong count the petals one by one love off love on that is all you can depend on crush the dream embrace the cold in the end thats all yo hold tear apart the flower oh so bold hear the screams the tales they told the fallen petals bleed and die and all you do is let out a sigh ignore their cry, suffering and sad all of this means that nothing is bad the flowers lie petals betrayed lying pleading their case abrupt Do not listen their tales corrupt tals of love and fairy tales lies of lust their words portrail the love is dead it has died and gone never forget that nothing is wrong Rip up the plant and bleed it dry now is the time to love or die! __________________ I'm not a freak on a leash, I'm just the freak holding the leash. http://www.myspace.com/yukiko_mori

05-09-2005, 12:58 PM	#2 (permalink)
ArtistInTheAmbulance enchanted. Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: cornwailles, angleterre. Posts: 2,537	I love it... I really do. Well done. __________________ shake your wings like theyre laced with sound!

05-09-2005, 01:34 PM	#3 (permalink)
coffeeshop From beyond the grave Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Merseyside, UK Posts: 480	Good effort... sounds like a sad song. __________________ "In this Catholic Club they never had the **ing TV on and I was going, 'That Big Brother, it won't catch on. British people won't watch that .' And then they went, at nine o' clock, 'Shh!' and turned the telly on! It was, like, people asleep in bed. To me, I can't understand that. The encouraging thing is, 'You were right all along, Smith: people are stupid." - Mark E Smith**

05-09-2005, 04:57 PM	#5 (permalink)
.angie. contrast&compare. Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 661	everyone is so good at writing songs/poems.. i have written a few things, i think they kinda suck. oh well. __________________ Jesus Christ, I'm alone again, so what did you do those three days you were dead?

05-09-2005, 06:01 PM	#7 (permalink)
.angie. contrast&compare. Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 661	.... maybe later. plus i feel retarded posting it. __________________ Jesus Christ, I'm alone again, so what did you do those three days you were dead?

05-09-2005, 02:30 PM	#4 (permalink)
SEVRINLEADER Music Addict Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 38	Pretty good stuff you got going.

05-10-2005, 09:55 AM	#8 (permalink)
riseagainstrocks Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: DC Posts: 3,320	the song has some cliched lines but overall it isn't bad. is there any music to it or is it a poem? __________________ One note timeless, came out of nowhere...

05-20-2005, 08:50 PM	#9 (permalink)
aclotm Groupie Join Date: May 2005 Location: hay Posts: 1	it's alright.

05-21-2005, 10:54 AM	#10 (permalink)
Imonlydancing raaaaaaa Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Bedford Posts: 951	i rather like it. it has a nice vibe to it. what kind of music is it for?

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