My **** (lyrics, rap, member, quote, song)

sexpistol8212 · 05-27-2005, 09:27 PM

Here is some of my stuff:

The female hitler

where do i go from here?
i sense the end is near
i cannot see your face
im stuck in outerspace
I fell into your trap
i felt your evil slap
so i knew i had to do
something about you
Its the end of your reign
im going insane
i could have ripped out my brain
Now i walk from you
my hell is done and thru
You fed me to the sharks
you locked me up all dark
You took its all from me
i never looked i couldnt see
i never realized
i was so ill advised
I would have never guessed
until i saw i was in ur nest

.angie. · 05-27-2005, 09:33 PM

that sucks. and you're an idiot. leave the forums NOW.

jesus · 05-27-2005, 10:24 PM

haha angie

.angie. · 05-27-2005, 10:31 PM

well. he's an idiot, it's proven by his retarded lyrics. it ALL rhymes, like bad (very bad) rhyming.. honestly, that's stupid. he bothers me already.

IamAlejo · 05-27-2005, 11:02 PM

I looked just to double check, but there isn't anything here that you've written Angie. Hmmmmm....

.angie. · 05-27-2005, 11:31 PM

i write stuff. it's just really personal and i dont feel comfortable posting it.

blackTshirt · 05-28-2005, 04:29 AM

but don't call him an idiot. i like the "waking up in your nest" part. oh wait, it's not exactly how i remembered it... but.. try to write longer lines or at least write some more lines between the ones that rhyme

phoenixflames · 05-29-2005, 12:09 PM

Yeah, rhyming every two lines makes it quite.... cheesy. Sounds like rap or something (which maybe it is?). Not really something I would want to listen to in a song.

~~stonedpath~~ · 05-29-2005, 07:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sexpistol8212

Here is some of my stuff:

The female hitler

where do i go from here?
i sense the end is near
i cannot see your face
im stuck in outerspace
I fell into your trap
i felt your evil slap
so i knew i had to do
something about you
Its the end of your reign
im going insane
i could have ripped out my brain
Now i walk from you
my hell is done and thru
You fed me to the sharks
you locked me up all dark
You took its all from me
i never looked i couldnt see
i never realized
i was so ill advised
I would have never guessed
until i saw i was in ur nest

Congrats Your the new Dr. Seuss

ladyluckrules · 05-30-2005, 08:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by phoenixflames

Yeah, rhyming every two lines makes it quite.... cheesy. Sounds like rap or something (which maybe it is?). Not really something I would want to listen to in a song.

female hitler rap, has a ring to it!

05-27-2005, 09:27 PM	#1 (permalink)
sexpistol8212 Groupie Join Date: May 2005 Location: undisclosed Posts: 2	My **** Here is some of my stuff: The female hitler where do i go from here? i sense the end is near i cannot see your face im stuck in outerspace I fell into your trap i felt your evil slap so i knew i had to do something about you Its the end of your reign im going insane i could have ripped out my brain Now i walk from you my hell is done and thru You fed me to the sharks you locked me up all dark You took its all from me i never looked i couldnt see i never realized i was so ill advised I would have never guessed until i saw i was in ur nest

05-27-2005, 09:33 PM	#2 (permalink)
.angie. contrast&compare. Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 661	that sucks. and you're an idiot. leave the forums NOW. __________________ Jesus Christ, I'm alone again, so what did you do those three days you were dead?

05-27-2005, 10:31 PM	#4 (permalink)
.angie. contrast&compare. Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 661	well. he's an idiot, it's proven by his retarded lyrics. it ALL rhymes, like bad (very bad) rhyming.. honestly, that's stupid. he bothers me already. __________________ Jesus Christ, I'm alone again, so what did you do those three days you were dead?

05-27-2005, 11:02 PM	#5 (permalink)
IamAlejo Muck Fusic Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Virginia Beach Posts: 1,575	I looked just to double check, but there isn't anything here that you've written Angie. Hmmmmm.... __________________ a man, a plan, a canal, panama

05-27-2005, 11:31 PM	#6 (permalink)
.angie. contrast&compare. Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 661	i write stuff. it's just really personal and i dont feel comfortable posting it. __________________ Jesus Christ, I'm alone again, so what did you do those three days you were dead?

05-27-2005, 10:24 PM	#3 (permalink)
jesus cat addict Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 1,061	haha angie

05-28-2005, 04:29 AM	#7 (permalink)
blackTshirt The Randomness Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: romania.. shut up Posts: 854	but don't call him an idiot. i like the "waking up in your nest" part. oh wait, it's not exactly how i remembered it... but.. try to write longer lines or at least write some more lines between the ones that rhyme __________________ My rims never spin, to the contrary You'll find that they're quite stationary.

05-29-2005, 12:09 PM	#8 (permalink)
phoenixflames Something That You're Not Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Cold And All Alone Posts: 475	Yeah, rhyming every two lines makes it quite.... cheesy. Sounds like rap or something (which maybe it is?). Not really something I would want to listen to in a song. __________________ ----------- I'm the lead singer and bass player for the band The Ascent (And Decline) Of Terrion. Yay for me... We're from Ohio. Yay for us... www.theascentofterrion.com Be our friend on MySpace