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Old 03-09-2013, 12:11 AM   #21 (permalink)
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Sound:
https://soundcloud.com/user9117333/rbg
Scene:
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?f...type=3&theater

Poem:
Red, blue and green
Lines of grey come closer to me
Red Blue and Green
Smoke that's black come closer to me

What's in your mind today?
No, the pain never does go

A way to my lungs
****, I thought that pain was gone.
What are you hiding?
Behind your closed eyes
Why
Why
Why don't you think you can?
Touch higher than where you are

Red blue and green
You are quite
Like me

Red blue and green
Your smoke doesn't scare me
Red blue and green
Hey, come closer to me

Lines of grey
Don't pretend
you're some kind of crown!
How much does it hurt?
How hard have you tried?

Cos I only long to be
Nothing more nothing less
than a faithful tree

I only long to be
Nothing more nothing less
than a faithful tree

You carried me away
When stubbornly I insisted to stay
True joy
Has entered the wounds I cut for myself
You don't know how
to ignore my cries for help

Red blue and green
Your streams of water flow
so purely around me
Red blue and green
You're paper smoke
Don't scare me!
Don't scare me!

I am your faithful
Just want to be faithful to
Wanna be faithful to you

I am faithful
At least I think I'm faithful?
Tell me,
why your skin's so blue..








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Old 03-09-2013, 02:39 PM   #22 (permalink)
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Absolutely beautiful.
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Old 03-09-2013, 02:58 PM   #23 (permalink)
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I really liked that song, it had an old '40's/'50's lounge feeling to it, like something I'd hear in something film noir.
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Old 03-11-2013, 11:16 PM   #24 (permalink)
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Thank you for all the kind words***



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Who am i
Who am i
Who am i
Who am i

How many times
have we done this
to ourselves

How many times
we fought this
war from hell

Oh put down the knife
Lay down your sword
When has it saved you?

Might I suggest
to the man on the left
To take his mask off
We all see you
For the stains you’ve
put on the snow

Winter has never
been so warm
For the man on his knees
And the boy who’s
allowed to see

Such mistakes
of the woman with
her head turned
back to hope
I promise your prayers
will remain unanswered
until you ask

Who am i
Who am i
Who am i
Who am i

My best friend
can’t even stare
in to my eyes

Put down your arm
lay your hands flat
until you are prepared
to ask

To the boy who
felt like he was ignored
The snow still falls
and eventually the bricks
of the sky will open
The bricks of the sky
will open for the fire

Who are we
Who are we
Who are we
Who are we

Close your windows
Shut your doors
Pray silently for something more

Close your windows
Shut your doors
Silently pray for something

More than snowflakes
More than rooftops
More than skyscrapers
here to cut

More than snowflakes
More than rooftops
More than skyscrapers
meant to cut

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Old 03-26-2013, 09:56 PM   #25 (permalink)
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A cover of one of my favorite songs, "I Want You" by Common

https://soundcloud.com/itsmarisolle/i-want-you

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