Roku

Well yep, I'm working on a song called "Vampire" and it's about...eh, I won't say it if you can't guess it by the lyrics. X3

Anyways, I have some lyrics to it and I wanna know what you think about them. I don't have half of the lyrics, but only a few here they are:

Pre Chorus:

You make me feel alive again

Bring your neck closer to my hands
This is what my soul demands

Chorus:

So who's my next victim?

Bridge:

I’ve quenched my thirst but I love the taste too much (Dim the lights)
The smell of blood, boy, I’ll never get enough (Dim the lights)

Out from the closet or under the bed
Down to the carpets, your skin bled
From the basement or the attic
For the taste of blood, I’m an addict

--It's a real little bit, I know, but my personal favorite part of the song so far has to be the bridge. Those are probably the best lyrics I ever came up with.

So anyways, tell me what you think. If I can come up with anymore lyrics for the song I'll post them here.

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The Batlord

So what kind of music is this anyway?

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Roku

Oh, whoops, I can't believe I forgot to mention what kind of genre it was. X3

It has some rock and metal elements, I know screaming and stuff, but then there's this kind of whispering creepy thing to it. Here are two examples of the kind of genres:

Sticks & Bricks by A Day to Remember - The rock and metal part
My Little Box by Gabriel Mann - The whispering, creepy sound

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