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Old 04-17-2013, 12:46 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I am playing fair.
I am always in line.
I am seeing different people
I am seeing people changing their mind.

Whom i gotta stay with?
I cant always talk to myself,
I cant always be on my own.
so, unless you realize that you are expecting too high,
i am always gonna be a third person in this room.

i cant think of taking some random steps.
i gotta save what's left.
some dying relationship of mine.
some undefined stories of mine.
I know i cant always talk to myself,
i cant always be own my own
so, i gotta save what's left....

i will still play fair,
i will always be in line.
as long as i am awake
i will never change.
but I know i cant always talk to myself,
i cant always be own my own
so, i gotta save what's left....

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Old 04-21-2013, 10:48 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Very relatable... I'm going to assume that it's original haha? It's lovely and well thought out. Very honest and open.. I like that.
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Old 04-23-2013, 12:19 AM   #3 (permalink)
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it's original friend! yep its relatable.

thanks for the complement

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