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Old 11-21-2013, 04:36 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default I wrote a rather depressing song...

This is my first ever attempt at writing lyrics. It's raining and I've spent the day alone in my apartment listening to depressive music and contemplating my life. This was the result:


Day by day I wither away,
A frozen shell of my former self
Screams echo in the walls of my mind,
My mouth remains shut

I walk a thousand miles yet get nowhere,
Searching for a spark of life
I turn my gaze to the sky,
Arms outstretched in longing

Oh, cruel, indifferent world!
Let me feel the sun on my cheeks again!
Let my veins gush with blood once more!

Darkness envelops every light,
To shine no more
Why aspire to be anything,
We all share the same fate

Dreams of yesterday turn to dust,
Into the howling wind they fade
Clutch at the withered strands of life,
Hold them close to your heart

Hope torments my ever weary soul,
I know it can never be
In this moment I release everything,
Recede into the void

Only the wind will call my name
Until into Death's arms I collapse



I know it's probably not that great, but I hope I at least succeeded in conveying the intended emotions. What do you think?
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