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toosik 04-30-2014 05:02 PM

city state of mind, a k a Mr predictable,
and you didn't let us down, not at all, that sh.it was pitiful.
its typical, mate you're despicable,
my chats are irresistible, yours are non applicable.
what's wrong? your bowels irritable?
your house is inhabitable because of all the sh.it you smell,
i felt bad no one viewed your thread, so i gave you one,
but i didn't read it, , sh.it do you think im crazy son?
but dissing you is like and anti depressant ,
what'd be even better is if someone would hand me a weapon,
cos at the moment im so full of angry agression,
smith and Weston will spark your family's depression.

toosik 05-02-2014 06:15 AM

citystateofmind got banned so anyone else want a battle?

Tristesse 05-02-2014 01:44 PM

I would like that very much.

toosik 05-03-2014 04:13 AM

"hey my names tristesse, but my daddy calls me princess,
you about to bear witness to a whole new kind of sh.itness ,
but first how do i look in this dress?"
mate i wish to stress, that you're causing my eyes distress.
when my fist hits ya chest, that light you can see... its death.
it turns out this bitch is next, one line, wow im impressed,
you're better than ciystateofmind already, at least you writ less.
but you gotta do better than spitting just one line,
hit me with some rhymes, that shine like sunshine.
or are you just citystates split personality,
if so i look forward to seeing you start with a sh.it first analogy,
then continue to spit worse than when your dick burst from allergies.
lets just disperse the formalities, cos basically its started,
your mates'll be downhearted, when you're the faithfully departed.
so please don't just write sh.it that makes ya seem retarded.

toosik 05-03-2014 09:56 AM

what do you lot think of my lyrics? i haven't had much in the way of feedback. let me know. thanks

Tristesse 05-03-2014 04:38 PM

Sorry to break it to you pal, but your rhymes aren't that great;
for one thing, you don't know how to punctuate.
It's pathetic to start out with a parental reference,
if that's all you've got then it would seem you're quite dense.
So what if my dad calls me princess, I like it, ok?
Yours still doesn't know that you're actually gay.
What you say in ten lines, I can say in one,
You're a sad little loser, who takes it up the bum.
You're in no position to call me retarded,
and you certainly aren't ready for this shit that you've started.

RoxyRollah 05-03-2014 04:55 PM

^ Sweet statutory! I love you Triss....

Tristesse 05-03-2014 05:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RoxyRollah (Post 1446433)
^ Sweet statutory! I love you Triss....

sweet-statutory
defined as an extremely attractive female minor, under the age of 18
"Dude look at that girl over there......she's gotta be like 15 though......Sweet-Statutory!"

I do have a fine pair of tits, that's for sure.

RoxyRollah 05-03-2014 05:07 PM

It can go for a male also!

Tristesse 05-03-2014 05:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RoxyRollah (Post 1446437)
It can go for a male also!

My daddy calls me princess, apparently.

I'm a girl, and I'm loving every second of it!


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