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Old 06-13-2014, 04:56 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Thanks a lot for your help
I've just some questions : I don't understand what "Maybe you cared for me a little?" means. (In my song, I wanted to ask him if I took a place in his heart. Does it means the same ?) And for the sentence "But you were all for me", can I say "But you brought me all" ?
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You're welcome!

I feel you could say, "Did I have a place in your heart?" (rather than did I "take" a place in your heart), but then you'll be repeating the word "heart" quite a lot in the song.

I think that if someone says he cares for you a little, this means you have a place in his heart...but just a little place!

"But you were all for me" sounds awkward to me, so I would probably say, "You meant everything to me," or "You gave me everything." "You brought me all" sounds odd, but sweet, and I know what you mean by it.
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