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Old 08-19-2014, 01:40 PM   #1 (permalink)
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So, I am new for this community, and I was thinking that it could be nice if I would start my own thread with and post a few of my songs. So, in this thread, I will include lyrics and the guitar chords of the songs. If you want, you can try to get a better image of the song by playing the song. Singing those songs, only I can, as it's from the depth of my heart - don't even try haha.

Critics and suggestions are welcomed!


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From somewhere in the world.
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Old 08-19-2014, 01:50 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Default Whining-S hit.

Song: Whining-S hit.
Guitarplaying: Just strum it as you feel the groove.
Lyrics:

Dm A
Do you know that kind of feeling,
G D
When you're lonely and you're drunk,
You're sipping from the bottle,
And feeling so ****ed up,
You know that you're worthless,
And they tell you that you're not.

A Dm A D
Ohhhh... Nooo...

Nothing keeps a matter of,
How your life looks like,
You disappoint your people,
While you know you're right,
Dm A G D
But you're not.

This song ain't a solution,
But just another whining-****,
I am just ****ing useless,
And the song is kinda' lack,
A Dm
As I am,
A D
As I am.

Explanation: This song has been written by me when I was drinking alcohol yet, it was when I just began playing guitar and writing songs. Two days ago, I read that song, and decided to re-compose the melody of it. So, here are the new chords of the song.
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Old 08-19-2014, 01:59 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Default Gamingworld.

Song: Gamingworld.
Guitarplaying: Just strum as you feel right.
Lyrics:

A Em7
Inserting pennies to the slot machine,
G D
Entering the never ending game,
A Em7
Multiplayer computerized mate,
G D
Oh he just has thrown a nade.

A Em7
Choose your class, magician or an elf,
To win this game you have to spend yourself,
A Em7
Team with some partners, eliminate the strangers,
G D
To win this magic world.

Purchase a premium account, **** with bills your parents,
Change your identity, to get social fraternity.

Em
You're playing real life mode,
C
I am speaking about this world,
Am
You do your daily work,
Em G G G A(1)
In evening with your friends, you have no talk.


Explanation:

This song I wrote about this world, the world we live in - using the metaphor of the computer games we play (atleast a few of us). The final phrase of the song (starting with the chord Em), it is a little loud singing towards the crowd. Not of my favorites, though it's cute.
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Old 08-19-2014, 02:16 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Default I Can See You.

Song: I Can See You.
Guitarplaying: Just strum as you feel right. Notice: The tempo of the chorus is a little bit faster than the verse's one.
Lyrics:

Am E
I watch you through the window in the morning,
G D
I can see you there even if it's storming,
I rally my faith, one day you won't be ignoring,
I hoping that one day, wouldn't be boring,
Bottle over bottle just as a mourning,
Chasing the illusion you will be coming.

G D
And I can see you there within every heartbeat,
B7 Em
Roaming again your custom orbit,
G D
Into my heart,
B7 Em
Into my brain,
G D
And I know that someday, I will find you,
B7 Em
Not in my mind, but when you're realized,
G D B7 Em
Ohhhhhhh, Ohhhhhhhh

G D D

Am E
And I am writing down this song out here,
G D
Hoping that one day, you will hear,
Am E
And all my thoughts are about you near,
G D
Placing the piece of puzzle, so the picture's clear,
Showing the heaven that might appear,
Knowing that with me, you'll never fear.

G D
And I can see you there within every heartbeat,
B7 Em
Roaming again your custom orbit,
G D
Into my heart,
B7 Em
Into my brain,
G D
And I know that someday, I will find you,
B7 Em
Not in my mind, but when you're realized,
G D B7 Em
Ohhhhhhh, Ohhhhhhhh,
G D B7 Em
Ahhhhhhh, Ahhhhhhhh.

G D D

Em C G B7
Nothing will fall, with you out here,
Em C G B7
I'll make sure, you're happy,
Em C G B7
And the sky may fall, but it's just nothing,
Em C G B7
So come, and stay, hugging!
Em C G B7 B7(1)
Hugging, Hugging, Hugging!

Explanation: Well, it's sort of a love song. It is about a person that is living dependence on a woman that doesn't really exist. He imagines here in every step he takes, every move he makes - she's there, and he begs her love, but as everyone in this world, she's turning her back at him. Final phrase of the song (starting with chord Em) is a loudly sung.
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Old 08-19-2014, 02:17 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Oww, I just notice that it is disallowed to make the chords notified in their right place. Anyways, try to understand the tempo and get the playing.
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