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Old 12-13-2014, 04:07 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default SONG - Perspective

Feedback on these lyrics, please!

Oh, my dear
You've let me down again
You've let me down again
What a shame
Oh, my dear
Here we go again
Ruining our lives
Suffer for you
It's always the same
And it hurts me to think
All along, you're probably thinking
Of him
It hurts me to know
That despite my best efforts
You're still f***ed up
Were you even listening?
Well, I'm sorry
Burt I don't think I know what that means
I'd love you
Except what am I meant to feel?
Hey
You were always the one
Who questioned the authorities
And pretended to be nice to me
You
You were always that girl
You didn't fit in, but had the center of attention
Limelight
Spotlight
But you like the dark, don't you?
I'm afraid your daughter's becoming distracted
And the disease she has is not so easily contracted
For, you see, it's her brain
It's not reaching its potential
She's lying
Give her motivation
Hell, I'm sorry
But I don't think I know what that word really means
I want to love you
Except what the f*** does than entail?
You're all meant to be
Behind my back
But not in that way
The way I seem to assume
You are
Aren't you afraid of me?
I ruined your life and your ability to disappear
You say you love her, but I know you'll always end up here
I'm irresistible
Apparently just a friend, your enemy
Cos as much as I love you
You'll always wanna kill me
I can't help the way I am
The people you left behind
I miss you all, well I'll be damned
The ones who tried to be kind
I'm sorry if I confused you
Should we ever forgive?
But I don't know what
It
Means
The little girl inside your head
I'm trying to feel
The innocent one, she's always dead
But I don't know what's real
I love you but I don't know why
I cry
The day
You left me behind
I'm sorry
Let us down again
I'm sorry
Should I try again?
God, I'm sorry
Was that the right thing to say?
I'm sorry
That you loved me
Still love me
I am the voice inside your head
Saying, what have you done?
What have you become?
Innocence ended up dead
What have I done?
What have we become?
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