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Old 01-12-2015, 02:05 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Cognition

A chemical reaction,
a process of evolution.
Its always been a problem,
never a solution.

We hunt, bleed and kill for it,
the myth that it can be true,
the folly that is our white whale,
the memories of you.

The truth is it's a lie.
Dopamine in your brain.
Just your current fix.
Only delays the pain.

Nerve endings tingle,
the heart skips a beat.
The brain tricks us to forget,
we're nothing more than meat.

My eyes are finally open,
to the truth of all things.
There is no place for euphoria,
the end always stings.

The truth is it's a lie.
Dopamine in your brain.
Just your current fix.
Only delays the pain.

Lies. Lies. Lies.

The truth is it's a lie.
Dopamine in your brain.
Just your current fix.
Only delays the pain.

Sour acid in your stomach,
saline in your eyes.
It's all just reaction,
to reinforce the lies.

Dismissed the deception,
No longer feeling hollow.
The notion it's real dissipates,
the memories follow.

The truth is it's a lie.
Dopamine in your brain.
Just your current fix.
Only delays the pain.

Lies. Lies. Lies.

The truth is it's a lie.
Dopamine in your brain.
Just your current fix.
Only delays the pain.

Lies. Lies. Lies.
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Old 02-25-2015, 08:36 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hi, although i'm not quite sure what you song is about, I do like the flow of it and I think that the chorus is quite catchy. It sounds like a slow song because there is so much anxiety here but it is the chorus that gives this one its flow.
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