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Old 04-09-2015, 11:08 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Lyrically more competent than Jerry Springer fathering
Announcement: **** you all in the butt with a arrow from Robin hip shottin with his noggin bitch
Patch it up, move it along, the docter has got more orders
Scaring little orphans at Costco in the morning
Telling where and when the killer at, pass it up move right past
The idiot in the black, faking scars, what an ass
(Right?)
**** is moving quickly, kids are ****ing milking (for attention?)
Yeah scared little flowers disgusted at the wilting
Realize the only progress you've made is nothing really chilling
You just look so edgy that your competitors are missing, out right?
Well look here you little special ****in snowflake
I'm tired of your lurking like everyone is out to hurt ya
About to stab you in the face, and leave your parents ****ing mourning?
Not before you slit your own make em wish they'd gotten an abortion
Such a dissapointment to force your own misanthropy
Like "HEY EVERYONE PLEASE LOOK AT ME I NEED TO BE EXTORTED"
To the point where you look like a **** face that no one gives a portion
(But what about you?)
What about me is so mother****ing important?
(Your judging these people when you don't ****ing know them?)
Well **** I know I'm not that ****ing potent
Not like anyone listening will think of my lyrics as scorping or mean right?
(They might get the wrong idea.)
Well **** should I censor myself before I confess these sins to the churches?
(No, but think about the people your targeting right?
Like this could actually ****ing hurt them) I mean it's just a joke, a slam you all get that right?
(I would hope, but some might take this as a personal thing hold a grudge against your person)
**** man, I don't care writing is hartwarming
Disguising myself as something I'm not is therapudic and engrossing
Like I'm really this character who hates these ****ers I'm not endorsing
**** it, **** that, **** you for not supporting
Me with the gun in my head and the bullet biting full through
Onmisiciant like the God I used to adore to
With my doubt I'm not to sure if it's Atheism or the morphine
More please on my plate eat this vocabulary feel great
Say bi-bi bitch don't you know that I'm the sissy trait?
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Old 04-14-2015, 06:49 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Announcement: **** you all in the butt with a arrow from Robin hip shottin with his noggin bitch - stitch this
Patch it up, move it along, the docter has got more orders, dont think i can't wall between your borders
Scaring little orphans at Costco in the morning, i wake up in the morning i'm ****ing horney
Telling where and when the killer at, pass it up move right past - that
The idiot in the black, faking scars, what an ass, rewind and pass the smoking glass


(Right?)
**** is moving quickly, kids are ****ing milking (for attention?) i'll make a new invention
Yeah scared little flowers disgusted at the wilting, again what about the muther fxn children

Realize the only progress you've made is nothing really chilling
You just look so edgy that your competitors are missing, out right? in your arm i'm drillin
Well look here you little special ****in snowflake put your head oin this oven make it bake

I'm tired of your lurking like everyone is out to hurt ya make no mistake
About to stab you in the face, and leave your parents ****ing mourning? hope you enjoy the wake

Not before you slit your own arm make em wish they'd gotten an abortion, ben you around like contortion
Such a dissapointment to force your own misanthropy, you still missing me , see me i'm still ****in free

Like "HEY EVERYONE PLEASE LOOK AT ME I NEED TO BE EXTORTED"
To the point where you look like a **** face that no one gives a portion, and i've been portiioned,
(But what about you?), yer how what you do , bend around bend over for money yer you to
What about me is so mother****ing important?, whatever can be taken i ****in snorted

(Your judging these people when you don't ****ing know them?) hey i didnt tell you to turn around bitch still stay bent over until your told to okay then

Well **** I know I'm not that ****ing potent, what can be smoked i smoked it
Not like anyone listening will think of my lyrics as scorping or mean right?, walking along the freeway high as a kite
(They might get the wrong idea.), i like how eminem talled about how he ****ed britney speaars, i just ****ed a prostitute a ho
ill keep working along with my song though
Well **** should I censor myself before I confess these sins to the churches?, i'm not rich yet but i still have the lurches
you see i'm dealer , so got all the stuff so they hang around me wanting a free bee, mum dont know yet , but i'll prob end up i prision nex time she see me
think about the people your targeting right? waiting outside waitng for a drive by while they get fries like boys in the hood , blow them away then go home make
speed out out of sudefud.

Like this could actually ****ing hurt them) I mean it's just a joke, a slam you all get that right? take that bitch ****in choke
(I would hope, but some might take this as a personal thing - hold a grudge against your person) actutally i hold a grude against everything
**** man, I don't care writing is hartwarming, **** its storming still melting this spoon while all the drug addicts are swarming
Disguising myself as something I'm not is therapudic and engrossing
Like I'm really this character who hates these ****ers I'm not endorsing, yes thats right i'm still snorting coke dont get me high that long
**** it, **** that, **** you for not supporting, i'm suppose to be supporting my son

Me with the gun- in my head - bet you wish you was holding it instead - and the bullet biting full through- **** that band
bullet with b utterfly wings , , i aint no angel i'm worst thing you ever seen.

Onmisiciant like the God I used to adore to, do you see how i'm tryng to use big words but wat i'm realy saying is 'm going to kill you
With my doubt I'm not to sure if it's Atheism or the morphine, i'm stil using these words basic words drugs **** your hugs , when you sleeep tonight
ill cover you with a pillow and roll you up with a rug

More please on my plate eat this vocabulary feel great, **** i'm really wasted now, wont answer the last verse
Say bi-bi bitch don't you know that I'm the sissy trait? okay wasted enff now ingor the last two words this is gonna ****in hurt
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Old 04-14-2015, 06:49 AM   #3 (permalink)
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its good i fixed it though for you
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Old 04-14-2015, 07:30 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Wait what did you fix most of the stuff you added doesn't make sense with the lyrics.
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Yes its hip hop beat ect .. 123 - 123 _4the beat (choke/stitch ect
123" 123 -4
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Old 04-14-2015, 01:52 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Old 04-14-2015, 03:48 PM   #7 (permalink)
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its good i fixed it though for you
This is the most contradicting post I've ever seen.
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Fixed your post for you.
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