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ciprian 12-13-2015 01:09 PM

need support with this lyrics
 
hi,is there anyone willing to help me finish this song?
i'm kinda stuck and could use a litlle support

It’s complicated

Will not let the tears free cause ,
My mask will melt down,
You must not see who is under it.
Can not speak
Cause You might know what I think,
And can not move
Cause then you’l know what I feel
Will not,can not,wont’t let you see what’s real
So I’ll pretend to be this person ,me.

NathanTMusic 01-10-2016 06:46 PM

What kind of support do you need? I write music and I'm not as well versed in lyrics (pun not intended). What I do know is this, music always follows some kind of rhythm and the lyrics conforms to it, or vice versa.

mr.mick 01-18-2016 06:30 PM

yeah what is the help you're wanting?

Exo 01-18-2016 06:54 PM

Do you want us to write the end of the song for you?

Frownland 01-19-2016 09:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ciprian (Post 1660105)
hi,is there anyone willing to help me finish this song?
i'm kinda stuck and could use a litlle support

It’s complicated

Will not let the tears free cause ,
My mask will melt down,
You must not see who is under it.
Can not speak
Cause You might know what I think,
And can not move
Cause then you’l know what I feel
Will not,can not,wont’t let you see what’s real
So I’ll pretend to be this person ,me.

La la la la la la doot doot do do do
Love you baby oh oh oh
But I'm sad and complicay-ee-ay-ee-ated
Woah oh oh oh woah oh
*sultry saxophone solo*
La la la do doot doo it's complicated

Angel3010 01-19-2016 10:02 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Frownland (Post 1671193)
La la la la la la doot doot do do do
Love you baby oh oh oh
But I'm sad and complicay-ee-ay-ee-ated
Woah oh oh oh woah oh
*sultry saxophone solo*
La la la do doot doo it's complicated

that sure is deep as hell

Lane1777 02-19-2016 11:34 AM

I would try but the lyric here looks a little to personal to me. might be a better idea to finish it yourself, and it might take some time but I re-write songs I`ve had for years... little bits and pieces lay around till I think on them or go back and pick them up again..that's the truth.


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