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Old 12-13-2015, 01:09 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default need support with this lyrics

hi,is there anyone willing to help me finish this song?
i'm kinda stuck and could use a litlle support

Itís complicated

Will not let the tears free cause ,
My mask will melt down,
You must not see who is under it.
Can not speak
Cause You might know what I think,
And can not move
Cause then youíl know what I feel
Will not,can not,wontít let you see whatís real
So Iíll pretend to be this person ,me.
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Old 01-10-2016, 06:46 PM   #2 (permalink)
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What kind of support do you need? I write music and I'm not as well versed in lyrics (pun not intended). What I do know is this, music always follows some kind of rhythm and the lyrics conforms to it, or vice versa.
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Old 01-18-2016, 06:30 PM   #3 (permalink)
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yeah what is the help you're wanting?
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Old 01-18-2016, 06:54 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Do you want us to write the end of the song for you?
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Old 01-19-2016, 09:44 AM   #5 (permalink)
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hi,is there anyone willing to help me finish this song?
i'm kinda stuck and could use a litlle support

Itís complicated

Will not let the tears free cause ,
My mask will melt down,
You must not see who is under it.
Can not speak
Cause You might know what I think,
And can not move
Cause then youíl know what I feel
Will not,can not,wontít let you see whatís real
So Iíll pretend to be this person ,me.
La la la la la la doot doot do do do
Love you baby oh oh oh
But I'm sad and complicay-ee-ay-ee-ated
Woah oh oh oh woah oh
*sultry saxophone solo*
La la la do doot doo it's complicated
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Old 01-19-2016, 10:02 AM   #6 (permalink)
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La la la la la la doot doot do do do
Love you baby oh oh oh
But I'm sad and complicay-ee-ay-ee-ated
Woah oh oh oh woah oh
*sultry saxophone solo*
La la la do doot doo it's complicated
that sure is deep as hell
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Old 02-19-2016, 11:34 AM   #7 (permalink)
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I would try but the lyric here looks a little to personal to me. might be a better idea to finish it yourself, and it might take some time but I re-write songs I`ve had for years... little bits and pieces lay around till I think on them or go back and pick them up again..that's the truth.
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