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Old 01-06-2016, 04:34 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Autism. (An old poem of mine. :))

Hope all enjoy. This is a really old piece of work, but please, enjoy.
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Autism.

My definitions for this word are:
Brain Damage
Imperfection
Obsessive Compulsive Disorder (OCD)
Mental Illness
Frustration
Slow Learning
Incomprehension
Dense
Attention Defesit Disorder (ADD)
Intolerance
Paranoia

I am cursed with autism.
I am confused whether my thinking is normal or not.
I am the only one.
I see teens with incredible thinking power.
I see science everywhere.
I see sin.
My mind carries no common sense.
My mind can never come up with the right words for me to say.
My mind is imperfect.
I repeat real life events I see over and over in my head.
I concentrate on hatred passed to me from other people.
I have incredible issues.
There are people whom I see have flaws in their learning.
There is a brain tumor collaborating with my brain.
There is no cure for Autism.
This disorder scars my personality.
This disorder keeps me away from being a white sheep.
This disorder is my host.
Associated with selective hearing.
Associated with an incontrollable temper.
Associated with the word: Freak.
God granted me this curse.
God told me there was a pro for this curse.
God gave me supreme intelligence.
God engraved wonder in my sight.
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Really powerful! I love this!
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Really powerful! I love this!
Thanks!!! I really appreciate this. :3
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Old 01-23-2016, 08:56 AM   #4 (permalink)
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About the God thing, people with ADHD don't pay attention in church so they typically don't care about religion. Interesting fact you didn't need to know.

Interesting song by the way
Kinda-somewhat made my day
Hey, I have autism too!
Also, I have trouble making poo.

I really like rhyming too much
Even though, they're not very lush
I'd throw dead babies into a ditch
If I got to become an undead lich

*mic drop*

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Old 01-24-2016, 07:54 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Great poem about autism. Carry on!
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So powerfull. I love it.
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Old 02-19-2016, 12:02 PM   #7 (permalink)
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that's powerful, I question the title "poetry, although it flows very well maybe "free-verse
a favorite style of mine. ... anyway good.
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