Autism. (An old poem of mine. :))

FonzieTheSuperWizard · 01-06-2016, 04:34 PM

Hope all enjoy. This is a really old piece of work, but please, enjoy.

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Autism.

My definitions for this word are:
Brain Damage
Imperfection
Obsessive Compulsive Disorder (OCD)
Mental Illness
Frustration
Slow Learning
Incomprehension
Dense
Attention Defesit Disorder (ADD)
Intolerance
Paranoia

I am cursed with autism.
I am confused whether my thinking is normal or not.
I am the only one.
I see teens with incredible thinking power.
I see science everywhere.
I see sin.
My mind carries no common sense.
My mind can never come up with the right words for me to say.
My mind is imperfect.
I repeat real life events I see over and over in my head.
I concentrate on hatred passed to me from other people.
I have incredible issues.
There are people whom I see have flaws in their learning.
There is a brain tumor collaborating with my brain.
There is no cure for Autism.
This disorder scars my personality.
This disorder keeps me away from being a white sheep.
This disorder is my host.
Associated with selective hearing.
Associated with an incontrollable temper.
Associated with the word: Freak.
God granted me this curse.
God told me there was a pro for this curse.
God gave me supreme intelligence.
God engraved wonder in my sight.

Tristan_Geoff · 01-06-2016, 06:23 PM

Really powerful! I love this!

FonzieTheSuperWizard · 01-08-2016, 02:29 PM

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Originally Posted by Tristan Geoff

Really powerful! I love this!

Thanks!!! I really appreciate this. :3

Ro'Sothian · 01-23-2016, 08:56 AM

About the God thing, people with ADHD don't pay attention in church so they typically don't care about religion. Interesting fact you didn't need to know.

Interesting song by the way
Kinda-somewhat made my day
Hey, I have autism too!
Also, I have trouble making poo.

I really like rhyming too much
Even though, they're not very lush
I'd throw dead babies into a ditch
If I got to become an undead lich

*mic drop*

StuartJ · 01-24-2016, 07:54 AM

Great poem about autism. Carry on!

Snowless · 02-01-2016, 08:13 AM

So powerfull. I love it.

Lane1777 · 02-19-2016, 12:02 PM

that's powerful, I question the title "poetry, although it flows very well maybe "free-verse
a favorite style of mine. ... anyway good.

01-06-2016, 04:34 PM	#1 (permalink)
FonzieTheSuperWizard Groupie Join Date: Dec 2015 Location: United States of A Posts: 15	Autism. (An old poem of mine. :)) Hope all enjoy. This is a really old piece of work, but please, enjoy. ================================================== = Autism. My definitions for this word are: Brain Damage Imperfection Obsessive Compulsive Disorder (OCD) Mental Illness Frustration Slow Learning Incomprehension Dense Attention Defesit Disorder (ADD) Intolerance Paranoia I am cursed with autism. I am confused whether my thinking is normal or not. I am the only one. I see teens with incredible thinking power. I see science everywhere. I see sin. My mind carries no common sense. My mind can never come up with the right words for me to say. My mind is imperfect. I repeat real life events I see over and over in my head. I concentrate on hatred passed to me from other people. I have incredible issues. There are people whom I see have flaws in their learning. There is a brain tumor collaborating with my brain. There is no cure for Autism. This disorder scars my personality. This disorder keeps me away from being a white sheep. This disorder is my host. Associated with selective hearing. Associated with an incontrollable temper. Associated with the word: Freak. God granted me this curse. God told me there was a pro for this curse. God gave me supreme intelligence. God engraved wonder in my sight.

01-23-2016, 08:56 AM	#4 (permalink)
Ro'Sothian Groupie Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 2	About the God thing, people with ADHD don't pay attention in church so they typically don't care about religion. Interesting fact you didn't need to know. Interesting song by the way Kinda-somewhat made my day Hey, I have autism too! Also, I have trouble making poo. I really like rhyming too much Even though, they're not very lush I'd throw dead babies into a ditch If I got to become an undead lich mic drop Last edited by Ro'Sothian; 01-23-2016 at 09:00 AM. Reason: Autism

01-24-2016, 07:54 AM	#5 (permalink)
StuartJ Groupie Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 13	Great poem about autism. Carry on!

02-01-2016, 08:13 AM	#6 (permalink)
Snowless Music Addict Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 77	So powerfull. I love it.

02-19-2016, 12:02 PM	#7 (permalink)
Lane1777 Groupie Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 7	that's powerful, I question the title "poetry, although it flows very well maybe "free-verse a favorite style of mine. ... anyway good.