My Favorite Cookie

GuD · 11-25-2016, 03:08 PM

little debbie beat jenny
ran her out
livin off pennies
low brow
fine art
lookin good for free
if she say you love you
kill yourself for me
front n center
thought I loved her
just upset her
watch out
bish got a bad temper
cross the pond
red hair to fawn
hear about that kid
suicide by heroin
came back
dances in limbo
rumor has it
he inspired panic at the disco
brought up in a doomed town
can't wait to skip san francisco
dirty streets won't show you who you are
but what they want you to be
bad people
miami- best thing to happen
since nazi ****ing germany
don't tell secrets
to people who don't wanna know
didn't ask
to be this cold
so numb to your presence
feelin like a genophobic anhedonic asexual
got the hots for some other girl though
odd one she is the ferret woman
and I am the fearless befurred gecko
Set myself on fire
Don't know how to be a liar
Smirnoff ice engrained in my palm
For the rest of my life
Word of advice
never trust a ****
Vlad the impaler
might've had it right
Can't write about the church
cuz I destroyed it
Mother sold my soul
threw me down a mountain
Can't differentiate brothers from fathers
Can't say I need either
Teach me to speak words I can't hear
I described death
Your fate is something to fear
You wanted an idol
look in the ****ing mirror
Ask for a definition of your life
hand you your eyes and drink your tears
Be careful what you wish for
Never act surprised
I've had enough of your presence
it's a nuisance that haunts my ****ing life

Thelonious Monkey · 11-25-2016, 03:11 PM

Clickbait!!!!!!

Blank. · 11-25-2016, 03:12 PM

It's cool if you want to try and write some self loathing poetry, but try and pick a theme and stick to it.

GuD · 11-25-2016, 03:15 PM

it's not self loathing
it's the most narcissistic thing i've ever written

Blank. · 11-25-2016, 03:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by GuD

it's not self loathing
it's the most narcissistic thing i've ever written

Self Loathing and narcissistic Tendencies kind of go hand in hand.

~~ChelseaDagger~~ · 11-25-2016, 03:26 PM

For what it's worth, I liked it, and I rarely give compliments if I can avoid it.

The Batlord · 11-25-2016, 04:26 PM

I thought you weren't a chick anymore.

GuD · 11-25-2016, 04:59 PM

I ain't. The women referred to are women in my life that inspire my art

The Batlord · 11-25-2016, 05:07 PM

So you're not Jenny?

GuD · 11-25-2016, 05:17 PM

Jenny was an employer.

11-25-2016, 03:08 PM	#1 (permalink)
GuD Dude... What? Join Date: Oct 2013 Posts: 1,322	My Favorite Cookie little debbie beat jenny ran her out livin off pennies low brow fine art lookin good for free if she say you love you kill yourself for me front n center thought I loved her just upset her watch out bish got a bad temper cross the pond red hair to fawn hear about that kid suicide by heroin came back dances in limbo rumor has it he inspired panic at the disco brought up in a doomed town can't wait to skip san francisco dirty streets won't show you who you are but what they want you to be bad people miami- best thing to happen since nazi **ing germany don't tell secrets to people who don't wanna know didn't ask to be this cold so numb to your presence feelin like a genophobic anhedonic asexual got the hots for some other girl though odd one she is the ferret woman and I am the fearless befurred gecko Set myself on fire Don't know how to be a liar Smirnoff ice engrained in my palm For the rest of my life Word of advice never trust a Vlad the impaler might've had it right Can't write about the church cuz I destroyed it Mother sold my soul threw me down a mountain Can't differentiate brothers from fathers Can't say I need either Teach me to speak words I can't hear I described death Your fate is something to fear You wanted an idol look in the ing mirror Ask for a definition of your life hand you your eyes and drink your tears Be careful what you wish for Never act surprised I've had enough of your presence it's a nuisance that haunts my **ing life __________________ I spit bullets in my feet Every time I speak So I write instead And still people want me dead ~msc

11-25-2016, 03:15 PM	#4 (permalink)
GuD Dude... What? Join Date: Oct 2013 Posts: 1,322	it's not self loathing it's the most narcissistic thing i've ever written __________________ I spit bullets in my feet Every time I speak So I write instead And still people want me dead ~msc

11-25-2016, 04:59 PM	#8 (permalink)
GuD Dude... What? Join Date: Oct 2013 Posts: 1,322	I ain't. The women referred to are women in my life that inspire my art __________________ I spit bullets in my feet Every time I speak So I write instead And still people want me dead ~msc

11-25-2016, 05:17 PM	#10 (permalink)
GuD Dude... What? Join Date: Oct 2013 Posts: 1,322	Jenny was an employer. __________________ I spit bullets in my feet Every time I speak So I write instead And still people want me dead ~msc

11-25-2016, 03:11 PM	#2 (permalink)
Thelonious Monkey Caesar is home. Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 876	Clickbait!!!!!!

11-25-2016, 03:12 PM	#3 (permalink)
Blank. Jacob Sartorius Join Date: May 2016 Location: Dank memes Posts: 4,034	It's cool if you want to try and write some self loathing poetry, but try and pick a theme and stick to it.

11-25-2016, 03:26 PM	#6 (permalink)
~~ChelseaDagger~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Jul 2015 Location: In the fires of your own disillusion Posts: 684	For what it's worth, I liked it, and I rarely give compliments if I can avoid it.