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Old 11-25-2016, 03:08 PM   #1 (permalink)
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little debbie beat jenny
ran her out
livin off pennies
low brow
fine art
lookin good for free
if she say you love you
kill yourself for me
front n center
thought I loved her
just upset her
watch out
bish got a bad temper
cross the pond
red hair to fawn
hear about that kid
suicide by heroin
came back
dances in limbo
rumor has it
he inspired panic at the disco
brought up in a doomed town
can't wait to skip san francisco
dirty streets won't show you who you are
but what they want you to be
bad people
miami- best thing to happen
since nazi ****ing germany
don't tell secrets
to people who don't wanna know
didn't ask
to be this cold
so numb to your presence
feelin like a genophobic anhedonic asexual
got the hots for some other girl though
odd one she is the ferret woman
and I am the fearless befurred gecko
Set myself on fire
Don't know how to be a liar
Smirnoff ice engrained in my palm
For the rest of my life
Word of advice
never trust a ****
Vlad the impaler
might've had it right
Can't write about the church
cuz I destroyed it
Mother sold my soul
threw me down a mountain
Can't differentiate brothers from fathers
Can't say I need either
Teach me to speak words I can't hear
I described death
Your fate is something to fear
You wanted an idol
look in the ****ing mirror
Ask for a definition of your life
hand you your eyes and drink your tears
Be careful what you wish for
Never act surprised
I've had enough of your presence
it's a nuisance that haunts my ****ing life
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Old 11-25-2016, 03:11 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Clickbait!!!!!!
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Old 11-25-2016, 03:12 PM   #3 (permalink)
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It's cool if you want to try and write some self loathing poetry, but try and pick a theme and stick to it.
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Old 11-25-2016, 03:15 PM   #4 (permalink)
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it's not self loathing
it's the most narcissistic thing i've ever written
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Old 11-25-2016, 03:20 PM   #5 (permalink)
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it's not self loathing
it's the most narcissistic thing i've ever written
Self Loathing and narcissistic Tendencies kind of go hand in hand.
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Old 11-25-2016, 03:26 PM   #6 (permalink)
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For what it's worth, I liked it, and I rarely give compliments if I can avoid it.
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Old 11-25-2016, 04:26 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I thought you weren't a chick anymore.
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Old 11-25-2016, 04:59 PM   #8 (permalink)
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I ain't. The women referred to are women in my life that inspire my art
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Old 11-25-2016, 05:07 PM   #9 (permalink)
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So you're not Jenny?
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Old 11-25-2016, 05:17 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Jenny was an employer.
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