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Old 05-27-2016, 06:46 AM   #11 (permalink)
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This is love baby and it ain't always clean
Sounds like you're making an excuse to screw someone an uncomfortable one.
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Old 05-27-2016, 06:51 AM   #12 (permalink)
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Sounds like you're making an excuse to screw someone an uncomfortable one.


What? Like the back of a Volkswagen?
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Old 05-27-2016, 06:54 AM   #13 (permalink)
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When someone solicits my opinion of his written work, I get paid to give it.

But I'll give this bit of advice for free.

You should read more and write less. For a long while.
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Old 05-28-2016, 01:02 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Maybe studie some of the most notable lyricists and try using different techniques to see what you're best with.
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Old 06-09-2016, 05:04 AM   #15 (permalink)
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Maybe studie some of the most notable lyricists and try using different techniques to see what you're best with.
Good advice. Maybe tinge81 should take it and come back later.
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Old 06-09-2016, 10:03 AM   #16 (permalink)
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Just because nobody's mentioned it, the use of constant rhyming couplets is boring.
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Old 06-09-2016, 10:48 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Whenever I hear someone call their partner Babe, I know it is doomed.
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Old 06-10-2016, 03:01 PM   #18 (permalink)
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Whenever I hear someone call their partner Babe, I know it is doomed.
Where was this information at for my entire relationship?
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Old 06-10-2016, 03:05 PM   #19 (permalink)
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Where was this information at for my entire relationship?
Shoulda stopped listening to Slipknot. Woulda solved all your problems. You'd be married with twelve children.
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Old 06-10-2016, 03:42 PM   #20 (permalink)
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Shoulda stopped listening to Slipknot. Woulda solved all your problems. You'd be married with twelve children.
No! I'm marrying a bitch who listens to slipknot. So we can have slipknot children.
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