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kphiefer 09-14-2016 09:12 PM

Rate My Song plz
 
Wish -

(Verse 1)

Your face
Is melted in my brain
The thought
Is driving me insane

What more
Do I have to do?
To try
And get to talk to you

(Chorus)

Your beautiful smile
Though it's hard to admit
I would die for you
Run the Nile for you

And take you to places
You would never forget
Make the sky turn blue
Oh the things I'd do for you

I'd wish for you

(Verse 2)

The time
We ran like we were free
I thought
'Bout what we could be

Those days
We sat out by the sand
Now I'm
Asking for your hand

(Chorus)

Your beautiful smile
Though it's hard to admit
I would die for you
Run the Nile for you

And take you to places
You would never forget
Make the sky turn blue
Oh the things I'd do for you

I'd wish for you

(Bridge)

All I need is your smile
Staring at me for a while
All I need is your eyes
To stare directly into mine

But you would never change
Oh you wouldn't change
But you would never change
No you couldn't change

(Chorus)

Your beautiful smile
Though it's hard to admit
I would die for you
Run the Nile for you

And take you to places
You would never forget
Make the sky turn blue
Oh the things I'd do for you

I'd wish for you

Key 09-14-2016 09:25 PM

No.

Exo 09-14-2016 09:27 PM

Never.

Thelonious Monkey 09-15-2016 04:57 AM

Make me.

Blank. 09-15-2016 08:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by _Violet_ (Post 1744399)
Make me.

Ok.

*unzips pants*

CJ21 09-16-2016 12:34 AM

I'm not reading all that.

Sing for me

Xseven 09-19-2016 03:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 1blankmind (Post 1744442)
Ok.

*unzips pants*

Does that mean you give it a 1, or a 7?

Thelonious Monkey 09-19-2016 04:01 PM

I say you give your lyrics to Carly Rae Jepsen. Probably be a 10/10 banger.

Blank. 09-19-2016 04:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Xseven (Post 1746292)
Does that mean you give it a 1, or a 7?

*unzips pants*

Sorry. You have to pray to this god first, noob.


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