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Old 09-14-2016, 09:12 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Wish -

(Verse 1)

Your face
Is melted in my brain
The thought
Is driving me insane

What more
Do I have to do?
To try
And get to talk to you

(Chorus)

Your beautiful smile
Though it's hard to admit
I would die for you
Run the Nile for you

And take you to places
You would never forget
Make the sky turn blue
Oh the things I'd do for you

I'd wish for you

(Verse 2)

The time
We ran like we were free
I thought
'Bout what we could be

Those days
We sat out by the sand
Now I'm
Asking for your hand

(Chorus)

Your beautiful smile
Though it's hard to admit
I would die for you
Run the Nile for you

And take you to places
You would never forget
Make the sky turn blue
Oh the things I'd do for you

I'd wish for you

(Bridge)

All I need is your smile
Staring at me for a while
All I need is your eyes
To stare directly into mine

But you would never change
Oh you wouldn't change
But you would never change
No you couldn't change

(Chorus)

Your beautiful smile
Though it's hard to admit
I would die for you
Run the Nile for you

And take you to places
You would never forget
Make the sky turn blue
Oh the things I'd do for you

I'd wish for you
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Old 09-14-2016, 09:25 PM   #2 (permalink)
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No.
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Old 09-14-2016, 09:27 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Never.
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Old 09-15-2016, 04:57 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Make me.
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Old 09-15-2016, 08:45 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Make me.
Ok.

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Old 09-16-2016, 12:34 AM   #6 (permalink)
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I'm not reading all that.

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Old 09-19-2016, 03:39 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Ok.

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Does that mean you give it a 1, or a 7?
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Old 09-19-2016, 04:01 PM   #8 (permalink)
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I say you give your lyrics to Carly Rae Jepsen. Probably be a 10/10 banger.
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Old 09-19-2016, 04:02 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Does that mean you give it a 1, or a 7?
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Sorry. You have to pray to this god first, noob.
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