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Mondo Bungle 10-29-2016 04:35 PM

The Purest Solitude
 
I haven't finished something in a while, feels nice. You don't gotta read it or analyze it or anything, no big deal, but if you should read, I would really love any opinions. No big deal, though. Just something else from me to inevitably swept under the couch and forgotten. I'm not one of the cool people.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...LmaTaVq2wQ/pub

Mondo Bungle 10-30-2016 05:12 PM

Anyone read

Key 10-30-2016 05:23 PM

read what

Mondo Bungle 10-30-2016 05:33 PM

I'll take that as a no

Blank. 10-31-2016 01:52 AM

Wow! Mondo, that's surprisingly good.

Mondo Bungle 10-31-2016 11:23 AM

Why is it surprising

Ol’ Qwerty Bastard 10-31-2016 11:26 AM

I didn't know people used Google Docs.

Blank. 10-31-2016 11:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mondo Bungle (Post 1763873)
Why is it surprising

I was expecting something that was decent, needed improvement. But I have no real bitches on it. The ending was somewhat surprising, it ties everything together quite nicely, it took me by surprise.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Qwertyy (Post 1763874)
I didn't know people used Google Docs.

I pretty much exclusively use google docs.

Mondo Bungle 10-31-2016 11:51 AM

Me too. I also don't have my own computer to save anything

I felt like I rushed the ending kinda. I wanted to be more horror originally but gave up after the door part because I guess that's not really my strongsuit

Blank. 10-31-2016 11:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mondo Bungle (Post 1763880)
Me too. I also don't have my own computer to save anything

I felt like I rushed the ending kinda. I wanted to be more horror originally but gave up after the door part because I guess that's not really my strongsuit

Google docs is nice, cause as long as you have a wi-fi you can work on it from any device.


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